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Hey who can help me improve this limerick?  I'll tell you who Paula! Thanks so much for the help and collaboration! Paula Goldsmith rocks!

Frilly Willy

We all know Frilly Willy has a crush,
his face shows it with a big blush.
Red was painting his face,
hoping to get to first base.
With the man who drives the city bus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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February 24, 2026 at 12:13 PM
What a fun write to read. Glad I could help. Enjoy your fun day writing away............
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February 24, 2026 at 8:15 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. I do Not know if I helped or Not. Sending Soupmail.... Have a fun day writing away............
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February 24, 2026 at 8:21 AM
All help is appreciated!
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