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Frilly Giddy Spring Zippy

Spring so pretty, come fever my ditty with daytime wispy and nighttime witty - not hot sticky, not cold chilly, but warm sun frilly and cool moon giddy that I may best invest in Spring's whimsy. If not too tricky, dream me scent zippy. Show your prissy, you change hippy, let your season's dizzy shake self-pity, blur ego’s icky, stop my dreads so shifty that rift me with heart feels of guilty. Take me swiftly with your quickie, spell-coy hickey so my joy now misty will soon bloom me Spring nifty. Juli Michelle's Rhyme Battle XII March 15, 2018

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Date: 3/15/2018 10:52:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, CayCay ! Hugs ~`*
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 11:21:00 PM
Thank you, Eve - seeing you reminds me that I would like to check if you wrote for this contest - think I'll click on over, rover. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/15/2018 7:20:00 PM
VERY whimsical, Caycay and me very LIKEY!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 11:20:00 PM
Your words make me happy and I share that gladly! Love ... CayCay
Date: 3/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
Fun poem, CayCay. Well done!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 11:20:00 PM
Thank you - it was fun to write, Line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/15/2018 1:18:00 PM
Caycay, you have used most of my favorite words here - zippy, witty, frilly, giddy, zippy, icky, quickie, hickey. This was a very fun read for me!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 1:56:00 PM
Hey, you - I had a great time, still grin when I read it, incorporating hippy into the scheme. You enjoy word challenges, or so I have rightly or wrongly surmised, and should try this contest. Really - get your Spring frilly on and jump in, Caren-girly. Thanks for reading / commenting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/15/2018 7:32:00 AM
a positive write, the rhymes are good..Good luck in the contest..
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thanks, it was a fun write. I wanna now check if you created one - if so, I know it is good. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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