Frilly Giddy Spring Zippy

Spring so pretty, come fever my ditty
with daytime wispy and nighttime witty -
not hot sticky, not cold chilly,
but warm sun frilly and cool moon giddy
that I may best invest in Spring's whimsy.

If not too tricky, dream me scent zippy.
Show your prissy, you change hippy,
let your season's dizzy shake self-pity,
blur ego’s icky, stop my dreads so shifty
that rift me with heart feels of guilty.

Take me swiftly with your quickie, spell-coy hickey
so my joy now misty will soon bloom me Spring nifty.




Juli Michelle's Rhyme Battle XII
March 15, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:52 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, CayCay ! Hugs ~`*
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Thank you, Eve - seeing you reminds me that I would like to check if you wrote for this contest - think I'll click on over, rover. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:20 PM
VERY whimsical, Caycay and me very LIKEY!
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Your words make me happy and I share that gladly! Love ... CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Fun poem, CayCay. Well done!
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Thank you - it was fun to write, Line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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March 15, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Caycay, you have used most of my favorite words here - zippy, witty, frilly, giddy, zippy, icky, quickie, hickey. This was a very fun read for me!
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Hey, you - I had a great time, still grin when I read it, incorporating hippy into the scheme. You enjoy word challenges, or so I have rightly or wrongly surmised, and should try this contest. Really - get your Spring frilly on and jump in, Caren-girly. Thanks for reading / commenting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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March 15, 2018 at 7:32 AM
a positive write, the rhymes are good..Good luck in the contest..
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thanks, it was a fun write. I wanna now check if you created one - if so, I know it is good. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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