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Frigid Waterfall (Haiku)

frigid waterfall. . .
crystal tears from fallen limbs
a woodland wonder



     For Raul Moreno's "Icy Cascade" contest

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Paul Callus

September 11, 2016 at 4:37 PM

I love your frigid waterfall, Connie, especially the 2nd line...very poetic. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

September 16, 2016 at 1:43 PM

Thank you Paul. I adore haiku but don't write it much anymore. : )

Kash Poet

September 9, 2011 at 4:03 PM

An excellent haiku here Connie...enjoyed.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 8, 2010 at 2:32 PM

Yes Matthew, it won the number 9 spot and I was really pleased. There were some awesome entries so I felt really honored to be amongst the winners.

Poet Destroyer A

September 8, 2010 at 12:22 PM

Congratulations on this haiku. Makes the perfect woods look lovely when you put it that way,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

April 2, 2010 at 8:01 PM

I like line 2 best! HUGS!!

Matthew Anish

March 5, 2010 at 9:28 PM

Beautiful haiku. Did you win the contest? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:42 PM

wow, connie, very pretty. I am so happy to see you on the winners' list! Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

March 4, 2010 at 9:51 AM

Awesome #9 Connie. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Thomas Kurdyla

March 4, 2010 at 9:49 AM

Connie, beautifully penned! A truly great Haiku! Congrats! Tom

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 3, 2010 at 9:42 PM

So very nice Haiku! Connie! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

March 3, 2010 at 7:42 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2010 at 5:12 PM

yes indeed - a nice one here, Connie. Congratulations to you and thank you for your comments!-Robert

Laura Mckenzie

March 3, 2010 at 12:54 PM

Connie! Thank you for your comment on my poem in Raul's contest your to kind! Congratulations goes to you as well I love your second line! Love Laura :)

Audrey Haick

March 3, 2010 at 12:24 PM

Ah, what a beauty, Connie! My warm congratulations to you on your win! Enjoy it! Peace, Audrey

James Fraser

March 3, 2010 at 11:31 AM

Connie, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Debbie Guzzi

March 3, 2010 at 9:38 AM

nice very nice..congrad's!

Joyce Johnson

March 3, 2010 at 8:53 AM

lovely descriptive words. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 3, 2010 at 5:33 AM

A big congrats Connie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. I knew the first time I read it ..it was surely a winner ..so now enjoy this wonderful moment and victorious win..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 3, 2010 at 3:22 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Connie. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

March 3, 2010 at 1:40 AM

Connie, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 1, 2010 at 3:40 AM

your second line evokes so much emotion--really liked this Connie, I wish you the best in the contest and I hope everything's doing good with you :) thanks for all your comments on my poems :)