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Friendship's Omission

As I
Soak in hummingbird’s exhale
I feel tragic sonatas
Trying to chain
Trying to crucify
My sedentary grip on instability

I smell the repugnant commoner
Blasting scattered shots
Against yesterday’s decent

I became the handsome error again.

The godfather of uplifting idle minds
Sedated within the bosoms of complacency
Because, indirectly, I was the inebriated screw-up
Immunized with community pride

As 420’d lyricists
Puff corrugated burns
To keep their spine
Fused in relatable,
Flaccid significance

They dodge flagrant accountability
Like an intentional cripple

And I
Slow dance with agnostic prayer

There would be no commandments
To remind me
That I am still beautiful inside

Beautifully flawed. 
Beautifully demonized.
Beautifully improper.
Ugly.

Yet, Gaia’s sun empowers this stanza
To breathe better breaths
To see what refuses to be seen

And no longer accept what cannot be changed

I carve milestones upon gravestones
In friends’ memoriam, nevermore

It felt peacefully redundant to be important,
Chiseling away the vowels of animosity
Attempts to hold my hands
Within this ambidextrous nightmare
Right hand, red
Left hand, chained

Courteous disdain
For developing minds,
Their figure of speech
Meant no blissful harm
With their 40 lashes
Conjured by judgmental testaments

Oh, how they preach for better tomorrows
While stirring yesterday’s pot

Becoming the “end” in “friend”...

©D.J.E.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/15/2017 7:41:00 AM
Holy Arepa! Drake! Hit this one oughta 3mi. island! Leaping lines take off with this poem's first utterances..."As I soak in hummingbird's exhale"....."it felt peacefully redundant to be important" wonderful, Drake! To my faves...this is good stuff, man!
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Date: 2/9/2017 4:25:00 PM
Vivid and intriguing. Wouldn't change a thing.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 2/9/2017 4:46:00 PM
Hey Fatima!!! It's been awhile. Yeah, I don't think I would either. Thank you for your 2 cents. :)

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