Friendship Flame -Unreplaceable-

There's so many different types of friendships
But there is a rare friendship out there
We found it
We didn't expect it
But I am so glad we had this friendship
Are friendship is a friendship flame
Its where your friendship has a little flame
Its the only friendship that runs deep and leaves scaring to

As we laughed together
As we made jokes with each other
We were making a friendship flame...which is an unreplaceable friendship

I had found this friendship flame
At the right time of my life
As my life....as my life felt like there was no more meaning to it
You showed up and made my darkest time in my life
A light gray instead of a black space with no return
That's what a friendship flame dose

Even though you were unreplaceable
I found myself in this really dark world
When you had taken your last breath
I didn't know what to do
I couldn't call you
You couldn't make it any better for me

With your last breath
The friendship flame had....had gone out
Leaving me in the dark
Leaving me with the smell of smoke
I'm struggling to try and relight the fire
Getting very tired
These tears wont stop
Then it hit me hard
You left me....when you did
Are friendship flame had went out to
Are friendship flame died with you
Both so unreplaceable

It's still smoothing today
It always will
It left a scare on my heart from it
That's the friendship flame.... that's so unreplaceable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/3/2017 8:18:00 PM
A sad well written poem.
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Agnes Lollman
Date: 9/12/2017 9:07:00 PM
thank you
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