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Friendship Bread

Dear poet friends departed, as I ponder
the things I learned about you and the way
our time together made my heart grow fonder,
there seems so very little I can say.

As poets sometimes do, I’ll use a metaphor.
Your friendship was a lovely kind of bread -
a sprouted whole grain I like even more
when it’s toasted warm and then with butter spread.

Notes to each other warmed the bread! I got to know
the person underneath the poetry.
Your poems were splendid, but our special glow
of friendship was the butter spread deliciously.

Every kind of bread has its own flavor.
The taste of joy you brought me can’t be measured.
Each friendship is unique, and I’ll always savor
memories of you with all my others treasured.

Dedicated to Dave Austin and to other poet friends I met along the way who since have passed away.

Sept. 3, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Very touching, Andrea. An awesome write. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Gentry Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem tribute!
Borke Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 8:55 PM
I'm impressed with the intellectual social media going on here, and love the poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:34 PM
This is a nice tribute to the poets friends that passed away. I also enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
Duet Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 11:29 PM
This is really a wonderful poem, Andrea. So heartfelt and sweet...like you, my friend. And, I'm sure your poet friend(s) who have passed would love it (and you) so much.
Borke Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 9:17 PM
This got me curious to read his poems. Having posted poems, through them, he sort of communicates from yonder to readers hither.
Breedt Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Hi Andrea, I was just saying to Jan how I miss Cay Cay too but she will be back. Sorry for your loss
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:13 PM
dropping back with my congrats on POTW:-) hugs jan xx
Fleming Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 4:52 PM
I was not aware Daver Austin had passed away; the gentleman occasionally commented on my mediocre efforts with such gallantry and warmness...he was both kind and generous. May you rest in peace, Daver Austin...for in the end, for all of us, it is just the poetry that remains -- Amen! In respect. J H Fleming.
Wanter Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. I hope those who have gone before somehow know they were appreciated by PS.
Yvonne Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 1:05 PM
First, happy birthday Andrea. I wish you everything good and more. Just heard about Daver. I loved him with all my heart. It feels like 'the music died'. I didn't know him well but his poetry spoke volumes about him. He was a gentle man. His poetry was sublime. Yes we have lost a few poets here. Our loss heavens gain. This is a beautifully written tribute. A Fav!
Daniel Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 10:01 AM
What a wonderful comparison and such a lovely dedication, Andrea !!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:47 AM
This is such a lovely tribute to our dear friend Daver, Andrea. It is really a perfect entry for the bittersweet contest! I sure will miss him, as I miss other great poet friends who have transitioned. Beautiful! : )
La France Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:34 PM
Andrea, this is so touching, it made me think of Linda-Marie and Dave and many others who have left us... well done and can you check your soupmail
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Andrea, This is an amazing tribute to Dave Austin (friendship). You are an amazing poet and person. If I had a small portion of your talent I would be AWESOME. It is a good entry for the "bitter sweet contest. As always I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis
Parker Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Done in a way only you could have done dear poet...very kind of you
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:57 AM
A thoughtful and tender piece.
Pett Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Such a thoughtful and beautiful tribute Andrea, your kindness and warmth is certainly conveyed through this well written poem, GL in contest, a winning one for me. :)
Emu Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 4:58 AM
A very heart rending tribute poem Andrea. Warm and comforting to read. Regards, Craig
Vaso Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Andrea, this is so sweet, it made me a bit sad, to think of the fine poets I have not met here, and have passed on, I read his poems, and wish I had known him! hugs!
Canerdy Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 9:03 PM
How beautiful and moving, Andrea, my new favorite. Janice
Raven Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 5:47 PM
A beautiful write for those who have passed Andrea. The words so touching and heartfelt, reach deep within the reader You are a sun my friend. This goes into my faves. HUgs....MIke. XX
May Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 5:33 PM
A heartfelt write Andrea...thanks for sharing
Parker Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 4:16 PM
You have a big heart Andrea, thank you for being so kind...Frederic
Bauer Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 3:50 PM
this is very touching and heartfelt, andrea! i love the whole bread metaphor - very creatively done...
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