Friendship

The most luxurious ship which money couldn't buy Offering many comforts every day and as years go by Sometimes it sails on rough oceans and seas But usually going so smooth with resilience, love and peace A ship taking its long voyage with care, kindness and sacrifice Patience, empathy,understanding, unselfishness and freedom lies It sails from dawn to evening, whole day and whole night Under the horizon ‘till adored by a romantic moonlight Its horn sounds signals of excitement on waiting and anticipating For lots of surprises with love that has no ending Aug. 7 , 2022 2.21pm FRIENDSHIP Contest Judged: 8/8/2022 9:17:00 PM Sponsored by: Beata Agustin Place 2 (out of 3 multi-w)

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 2:12:00 PM

Wonderful Metaphor for friendship, Len. Congratulations for your win my friend. Write On Len! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 8/24/2022 8:58:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend Bill for stopping by, reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always my dear friend from Texas. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 8/19/2022 6:20:00 AM

Your analogy of friendship to a great ship is so apt. You have kept up that beautiful comparison in the poem from start to finish . Wish to get into that ship and enjoy a great voyage over the placid lake of life. Lovely penning.... ! Congratulations dear Len

Len Gasun
Date: 8/19/2022 6:24:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend Valsa for your wonderful feedback, for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. I did try to keep it my dear friend thinking that I could also enter this to the sailing contest for another kind of ship sailing. Unluckily, it did not make it. Thanks a lot again. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/9/2022 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A very "Creative" write. Good friends/memories are the best kind to have. Have a blessed/day writing away...............

Len Gasun
Date: 8/15/2022 12:14:00 AM

hank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Paula. Sorry for the late reply coz I'm sick of covid up to now. God bless you. Hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/9/2022 5:31:00 AM

"The most luxurious ship" - Friendship is, indeed, most precious. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/15/2022 12:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. Sorry for the late reply coz I'm sick of covid up to now. God bless you. Hugs