Len Gasun Poet Couplet

Friendship

The most luxurious ship which money couldn't buy
Offering many comforts every day and as years go by

Sometimes it sails on rough oceans and seas
But usually going so smooth with resilience, love and peace

A ship taking its long voyage with care, kindness and sacrifice
Patience, empathy,understanding, unselfishness and freedom lies  

It sails from dawn to evening, whole day and whole night
Under the horizon ‘till adored by a romantic moonlight

Its horn sounds signals of excitement on waiting and anticipating
For lots of surprises with love that has no ending



Aug. 7 , 2022   2.21pm

FRIENDSHIP
Contest Judged:  8/8/2022 9:17:00 PM
Sponsored by: Beata Agustin 
Place 2 (out of 3 multi-w)

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Bill Baker August 23, 2022 at 2:12 PM Wonderful Metaphor for friendship, Len. Congratulations for your win my friend. Write On Len! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Len Gasun August 24, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thank you my dear friend Bill for stopping by, reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always my dear friend from Texas. Hugs

Valsa George August 19, 2022 at 6:20 AM Your analogy of friendship to a great ship is so apt. You have kept up that beautiful comparison in the poem from start to finish . Wish to get into that ship and enjoy a great voyage over the placid lake of life. Lovely penning.... ! Congratulations dear Len Len Gasun August 19, 2022 at 6:24 AM Thank you my dear friend Valsa for your wonderful feedback, for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. I did try to keep it my dear friend thinking that I could also enter this to the sailing contest for another kind of ship sailing. Unluckily, it did not make it. Thanks a lot again. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 9, 2022 at 10:58 AM Congratulations on your win. A very "Creative" write. Good friends/memories are the best kind to have. Have a blessed/day writing away............... Len Gasun August 15, 2022 at 12:14 AM hank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Paula. Sorry for the late reply coz I'm sick of covid up to now. God bless you. Hugs

Christuraj Alex August 9, 2022 at 5:31 AM "The most luxurious ship" - Friendship is, indeed, most precious. Congratulations! Len Gasun August 15, 2022 at 12:14 AM Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. Sorry for the late reply coz I'm sick of covid up to now. God bless you. Hugs