Friends That Bled

my heart that beats without a drum 
its cheating starts from your fake glum 
and thundering sounds of natures turn 
instead does pound my beatless churn 
and smell i may of dead mans waste 
and see i may of dying breeds race 
and hear the sounds of babys cry 
to motherless frowns as the earth now dies 
and again my beatless heart stops dead 
and friends i never knew now bled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Interesting rhyme in these short lines. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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