Friends Footles

Good friend
Depend

You say
Bad day

Bouquet
On way

We care
We share

Good day
Hurray

Sad mug
Big hug

Bad friend
The end

Jan Allison
20th August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 3:14 PM
gosh, I had to go back pretty far to find something not commented to by me yet. Let me see this set now! You are really good with the story telling type of footles, Jan. this was cute!
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 3:17 PM
I have such fun writing these Andrea and I love it when other people suggest ideas i could have used:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Callus Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Good for you Jan....you sure have got the hang of these footles:) They are fun and once you start it is hard to stop!! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Oh Paul I'm addicted to them now LOl - not a bad thing to be addicted to I guess - only harms my one poor remaining brain cell! Hugs jan xxx
Nance Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 3:00 PM
excellence, you are the footle master!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Lol Casarah - mail on its way I can smile again:-) Hugs janxxx
Mehta Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Very brilliant with messages, Jan
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Dr Mehta:- These are just for fun but I have so enjoyed writing these little poems:-) Hugs jan xxx
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Dear Jan, Just yesterday a friend came to the rescue with a much-needed "big hug." It's always sad to lose a friend, but if they behave badly, it is the end. Love your footle series!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:51 AM
Thanks Carolyn and it is also so sad when a friendship ends abruptly seemingly for no reason at all - that is also so sad:-( Big hug - guess we all need them some days:-) Jan xxxx
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:29 AM
SWEET to see the Poets having a great time with these Footles. Good Stuff! Set the Soup Ablaze!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:46 AM
they are simple and effective and I love them Mr Roboto- and they don't tax my poor old brain too much! Have a great day:-) Hugs jan xxx
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 4:15 AM
Excellent. Nicely done. Enjoyed. Tfs
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:45 AM
thanks for the lovely comment Ravi:-) Hugs jan xxx
Manassian Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:38 PM
You are great in this form, Jan!!! :) I think you need a prize for having come up with so many great ones! :) Hugs
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:52 AM
just for fun Eileen - keeps me smiling at the moment:-) Hugs jan xxx
Gorelick Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Footle heaven! You got it going on...BG
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:52 AM
Thanks Barbara I cant stop now! Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Share dish....delish......best mate... you're great....help out...no doubt......hugs sweetie :) Tim :)
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:17 PM
I'll let you do all the hard work :) get some sleep....good night...sleep tight
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:15 PM
Aww Tim you need to do some of your own - they are super:-) Hugs Jan xx bed time .... divine:) its gone 2am !!!
Harrell Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:10 PM
Bad friend - the end is right! Enjoyed :)
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:11 PM
It sure is:-) But a good friend is for life:-) Hugs jan xxx
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