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Friends As Lovers

I yearn for your touch the feeling's too much to lay down with you 'til we're no longer two Reaching a euphoric state for now you're my mate as time stands still in accordance to our will Our senses come alive in pleasure we do thrive the night comes and goes but we'll never stand as foes Because we'll always have this night to remember with great delight and if it shall pitter without ecstasy then by the gods just let it be For it was worth every moment we shared just to show each other we cared

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Date: 5/10/2023 5:28:00 PM
It's hard and sometimes risky to give yourself to someone not knowing if it will work for you or against you and likewise for the friend. Your fourth stanza speaks well of regret and possible gamble still so many are willing to take with little thought of consequences. A read worth writing about, White Wolf.
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Date: 2/3/2021 1:08:00 PM
"Our senses come alive" Such a beautiful moment indeed. "Friends as lovers" When a connection becomes so strong, it can certainly happen. This is soft, sensual and romantic. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/3/2021 10:03:00 AM
Nothing greater then to lose yourself in love and its impassioned reign . You warmed my heart dear friend with your touching write, take care, :)
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:07:00 AM
‘til we’re no longer two...an exact match! Nice!
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Date: 2/3/2021 5:38:00 AM
I hope she got to read this beautiful poem. It’s very lovely, sweet and romantic.
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Date: 2/1/2021 5:24:00 AM
A sensual write.
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2021 9:07:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Kim. Nice to see you're still here
Date: 2/1/2021 1:02:00 AM
Hmmm ... boundaries blur! Beautiful write!
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2021 9:06:00 PM
True, Tom!

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