Friend

Creative
Light
Energy
Flowing through these 
Lips
Hips 
And dangling from my 
Fingertips
The essence of my being you could never eradicate
Denying me of your sensual touch 
Because you thought I was gonna fuss
See all I wanted was a
 Pure
Honest 
Love
But see you distorted it with your conniving
 Lies
Looking at me with your bedroom eyes
See I got lost for a second no I’m lying 9 months
Wanting you to hold 
And caress
 Me like you said you would
All along I should have been Watching
Walking in my 
Spiritual Zone
Because you stabbed me deep down to the bone
Why did you perpetrate the stereotype of a true friend?
Caring
Patient
Christian Man
Now with my eyes washed from that deep 
Comatose
Temporarily Insane Sleep
I Pray & Weep
I Pray & Weep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/31/2010 2:02:00 PM
Yes James I Was Hurting Really Bad.... Thanks For Compliment
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:01:00 PM
Feelings of being hurt i detect in this prose piece >> nice read Tanya >> James
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