Friend

What to me is a friend? Someone who doesn't pretend They're true to my face My faults they embrace They'll stay with me to the end They share my joy and pain Through sunshine and rain They cry when I'm sad And laugh when I'm glad Don't care if I'm timid or vain So where do I find one of these? Don't grow on bushes like peas Right here in you My friend ever true We surf life's stormy seas

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Milton Robertson

Date: 11/6/2023 2:00:00 PM

Such lovely poems, the rhyme is on time and on the one, reading them is fun, very well done.

Aly Bahr
Date: 11/6/2023 2:38:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you Milton.

Sandra Doolan

Date: 11/5/2023 6:16:00 PM

Oops, I just love your Friend poem Warm Regards Sandra Doolan

Sandra Doolan

Date: 11/5/2023 6:11:00 PM

G’day Ali I love your Friend poem and I love it ????. I would love to be your friend, you inspire me. Take care. Warm Regards Sandra Doolan

Aly Bahr
Date: 11/6/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra, I would be happy to be your friend. xxx

Diane Perna

Date: 11/3/2023 4:23:00 PM

All of your poems are so lovely! I can truly relate to each one of them!

Aly Bahr
Date: 11/4/2023 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Diane. I'm truly glad you have enjoyed my words.

Kevin Lawrence

Date: 11/3/2023 3:40:00 PM

Well done. Well constructed and most of all, a beautiful praise of true friendship. Thank you.

Aly Bahr
Date: 11/4/2023 5:35:00 PM

Thank you Kevin for your kind words.

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 11/3/2023 1:55:00 PM

A beautiful poem and tribute to your friend. A most enjoyable read for me this evening :-)

Fire Bird

Date: 10/20/2023 1:09:00 AM

A beautiful poem about a lovely friend!! - Phoenix :)

Aly Bahr
Date: 10/20/2023 4:00:00 AM

That's your Pa I'm talking about! :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/19/2023 3:12:00 AM

Friend- fun to serious of life everywhere friend is real approaching being; nice to read your limerick on friend

Aly Bahr
Date: 10/19/2023 12:07:00 PM

Thank you kindly for your words.

Sam Scott

Date: 10/19/2023 1:38:00 AM

Wow. I shouldn't get emotional over this but :'-) .. I guess friendship is the kind of love that is precious in a deeper and more meaningful way that many other types of love. Particularly the rare kind you describe.. I love "We surf life's stormy seas" conjures up an element of dis-regard of danger, togetherness and shared experience only storms can bring. Really nice job. +Fav

Sam Scott
Date: 10/20/2023 10:54:00 AM

That is awesome to hear! :)

Aly Bahr
Date: 10/19/2023 12:09:00 PM

This friend is my partner, we've been together a very long time and he is still my best friend.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 10/19/2023 12:39:00 AM

A lovely poem and description. Well written.

Aly Bahr
Date: 10/19/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thank you.