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FRIEND
A friend is like a bright sparkling mirror, since long with pride I have hung on my wall. It does not lie to me, I do admire, always helps me face me at my pain's call. A friend is like the sky over my head, brings down sunshine and rains of need for me, takes me to lie on stardust strewn dream bed, daylight shows me the path I fail to see. When my old muse starts poetic journey poet who paints visits, finds me on site. I have learned, we share charms of art many, poems find words and rhyme, I get insight.
June 16, 2018 Written in iambic pentameter Syllable count : 10 each line (Checked on howmanysyllables.com) English is not my first language

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Date: 6/27/2018 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of friendship. An awesome tribute also. Well-written and sincere. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:45:00 PM
Thank you for your visit, Susan and for the nice comments.
Date: 6/26/2018 2:29:00 PM
Many congrats subimal :-) hugs Jan xx I wonder if your tribute is for Pashang :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. No, it's not for Pashang.
Date: 6/26/2018 11:49:00 AM
Your poem is warm and moving, Subimal. Congratulations on your win! (I'm wondering who your friend on the sight is.) Hugs, Carolyn
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn.
Date: 6/18/2018 1:46:00 AM
I loved the stardust strewn dream bed line. This is a lovely piece about the value of a true friend. Good luck in the contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2018 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen for visiting and for your nice comment.
Date: 6/16/2018 10:22:00 AM
Very nice Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2018 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.

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