Notes About The Poem

friday nite invites

Outside it’s breezy and twenty degrees
in here the air feels humid and still
the floor’s elbow-to-elbow and I guarantee
dance for 40 minutes and the heat can kill

I left the dance floor
fully drenched
we drank at the bar
til our thirst was quenched

I peeled off my overshirt
but that didn’t work
I still felt flushed and sweaty
a guy motioned me to dance
but I wasn’t ready

Then someone opened the door
the icy air rushed in—I didn’t flinch
It felt like heaven—I wanted more
dance guy was back, the entitled prince

the 05611 is full of pushy guys
when they want something
they try and try and try
I pretend I can’t hear them
cause the music is bumping

Friday nights are such a release
a time for fun and controlled caprice
but it’s also a hot-point time to do-a-prendy
when you say no, divers can turn unfriendly

I’m not Julie Andrews—I’m not offended
It’s kind of a complement, I’m just not interested
If you can take a yes, then you should take a no
I could be protecting you, for all you know,
so chill-out playas, don’t be so gung-ho.
.
.
Songs for this:
Hit My Heart by BOY
Cake By The Ocean by DNCE
BLT Merriam Webster word of the day challenge 01/23/25:
Divers = numbering more than one

do-a-prendy = a quick hookup
05611 = Yale's zip code
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sambourne Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 5:29 PM
Terrific poem on the give + take of the club scene for youths in a full on seduction + temptation ritual. Your poem dances like the "playas" so "gung ho."
Vionet Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 5:48 PM
Thank you =]
Conn Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 11:47 AM
Well, as long as they were fighting over your attention and not your wet tee-shirt …
Conn Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 6:13 PM
One girls tees is another boys fashion.
Vionet Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 5:20 PM
=] My wet t-shirt =] Ha! They're not fighting over me, that'd be the day.
Conn Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Oh dear, you made a rhyme with ‘you know’ and ‘gung-ho’. =]
Vionet Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 5:40 AM
I'm pullin' out ALL the stops. =]
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace