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Friday Night Lights

Twinkle twinkle, the lights red blue and green,
On the end of the week, twilight evening scene.
The partygoers emerge, stardust in their eyes,
Like the sunshine glare on golden butterflies!

The end of a long day, withal the end of a week,
Sequins after sunset, and full moon of mystique.
My working days behind me, stars shine so bright,
Along with many yellow orange and purple lights!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:29 PM
Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.
Buehler Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:44 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks for the words of delight. Blessings.
Y. Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Hi Evelyn, Your title made me think of the movie with the same title. As always, your imagery and content were good. I enjoyed the lovely lights. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hi Alexis, Your words bring cheer into my afternoon. Thank you so much for your heartwarming insights. Have a wonderful week. :D Evelyn
Poet Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:05 AM
This is just ever so delightful, Incredible; I know its rhyme, but it has a rhythm that touches the heart. Have a Great day, Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:29 PM
I'm touched that you're touched, Las. Thank you ever so much, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:51 AM
So well expressed though I miss the flowers. Lovely poem.
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:33 PM
Thank you so much, Victor. Not to worry, flowers are never far from me. :D
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:11 PM
charming poem, Evelyn ~
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Thank you, Line. :D
Wolf Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:05 PM
This is just ever so delightful!! I'm here beaming, having read it three times now. Just wonderful, Evelyn. :) gw
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:42 PM
What a fine compliment that is, Gershon! Thank you very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D
Pettit Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Nice colorful rhyming here. The way that guy's fingers go up and down those keys reminded me a bit of the late Chico Marx.
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:38 PM
Thank you, Robert. I love music almost as much as poetry-all kinds of music. :D
Hankins Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Such lovely imagery, and I enjoyed the music to accompany, Evelyn. Nice job!
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Milton. That is so elating.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 6:09 PM
I see a disco ball and I feel like dancing.
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:49 PM
I was hoping you'd join me. :D
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