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Friday

You’ve been sick since Tuesday I can’t afford to lose you, babe I can’t live without you So let me take off all these tubes let me free you of these chains let me help you break out of this prison I can’t live alone please let me take you home let me bathe us in this holy water this golden holy water let me bless the whole house with it every corner of it and light it up then stay there ‘till we see the light So we can finally be together forever 12/26/2015 CONTEST: DEEP AND DARK SPONSOR: BROKEN WINGS

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Date: 3/2/2016 6:33:00 AM
A magnificent write.
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:13:00 AM
:) anytime. Have a beautiful day
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:00:00 PM
ELIS, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
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Elis Artis
Date: 1/26/2016 4:14:00 AM
Aww you're so welcome, dear Linda:)
Date: 1/24/2016 11:05:00 AM
Friday is always a special day. Nice write.
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Elis Artis
Date: 1/24/2016 2:22:00 PM
Not in this poem though, it's more of a sad one. Thank you so much for stopping by Neldy!
Date: 1/15/2016 10:10:00 PM
ELIS, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/22/2016 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda! I appreciate that:)
Date: 1/13/2016 7:04:00 AM
I see this is a winner! Congratulations on your deserved win.
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Richard:)
Date: 1/9/2016 3:34:00 PM
Seems this was a winner, congrats certainly deserves the accolades...
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Elis Artis
Date: 1/12/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Harry:) I appreciate it
Date: 1/8/2016 7:30:00 PM
Elis, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear SKAT A
Date: 1/8/2016 10:33:00 AM
Elis, I feel your desperation. Nice write.
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Date: 1/8/2016 3:37:00 AM
Well done, Elis. Congrats on your placement.
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Elis Artis
Date: 1/12/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Lin Lane:) I appreciate that
Date: 1/7/2016 9:28:00 PM
Elis, Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:19:00 AM
- Elis, a great poem for the contest .... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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