Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Fresher the Blossoming

Fragile mirrors slice darkened cellars
bead by bead, she whispers a prayer;
thorns of farewell clasp her heart ,raking
as twilight closes fading lamps, bare.

Although a tight knot of vein weakens,
chafed hard... memoirs leave a tender spot
a warmer throb, a much closer touch ;
when cold love flown still matters a lot.

Now runes of time's destiny appeal
for one chance...his lies so wide and deep;
that mate's peach roses arrive, quite late,
as moon drones softly so eyes can sleep. 

If ever, sleep will cave her trembles
allowing time to heal...in breath's delight
her new hours can greet scented flowers,
to sprout fresh blossoms, to wake a night.



Sheri F. Harper's Rock Me Around the Clock
or Rock Me to Sleep--Rhythm Poems

by nette onclaud...1/6/2015

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Skat A February 16, 2015 at 12:10 AM Nette, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~

Debbie Guzzi February 13, 2015 at 7:52 PM Very evocative- you never disappoint! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love

Eve Roper February 13, 2015 at 6:15 PM Congratulations on your win, Nette , a 7. Blessings Eve

Sandra Haight February 13, 2015 at 4:35 PM Congratulations on your nice win, Nette. I really enjoyed your poem. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison February 13, 2015 at 2:03 PM such a beautiful flow to this poem Nette. Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sheri Fresonke Harper February 12, 2015 at 9:15 PM Nette, congratulations on your win, very beautiful and full of rhythm. Thanks for entering my contest.

Debbie Guzzi January 8, 2015 at 2:57 PM Sleep will cave her trembles- what a unique image!Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen January 8, 2015 at 4:15 AM - Oh ..... so beautiful in my ears !!!! - As always a pleasure to read your poems, dear Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser January 7, 2015 at 4:57 PM A beautiful poem, that flows quite nicely.

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2015 at 3:58 PM It feels soft, just like a lullaby!

Harry Horsman January 7, 2015 at 9:43 AM you rock dear nette, i read you and i find emotions i never knew i had..

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 7, 2015 at 9:05 AM Your poem has made my soul fragrant with holy incense of your rhyme, nette. So powerful but so delicate. Good luck. My Topper.Your friend Rajat

Monterey Sirak January 7, 2015 at 7:00 AM This one is a classical beauty filled with soft images that roll with the rhythm of a lullabye.

Frederic Parker January 6, 2015 at 5:55 PM There's sadness and wishes flickering within this poem, not only new hours but new hope...good luck my poetic friend

Connie Marcum Wong January 6, 2015 at 5:18 PM Oh wow Nette, I see this as a top winner already. This is just beautiful!

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2015 at 4:34 PM Reads like a winner..Way to go..Interesting thoughts penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Franco Gonza January 6, 2015 at 3:03 PM Nette, tremendous way to describe love's end and spark new beginnings. Top-notch poetry!

Ken Carroll January 6, 2015 at 2:35 PM Another well crafted write Nette..Hope you're having a wonderful New Year!