Fresher the Blossoming

Fragile mirrors slice darkened cellars
bead by bead, she whispers a prayer;
thorns of farewell clasp her heart ,raking
as twilight closes fading lamps, bare.

Although a tight knot of vein weakens,
chafed hard... memoirs leave a tender spot
a warmer throb, a much closer touch ;
when cold love flown still matters a lot.

Now runes of time's destiny appeal
for one chance...his lies so wide and deep;
that mate's peach roses arrive, quite late,
as moon drones softly so eyes can sleep. 

If ever, sleep will cave her trembles
allowing time to heal...in breath's delight
her new hours can greet scented flowers,
to sprout fresh blossoms, to wake a night.



Sheri F. Harper's Rock Me Around the Clock
or Rock Me to Sleep--Rhythm Poems

by nette onclaud...1/6/2015

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:10:00 AM
Nette, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/13/2015 7:52:00 PM
Very evocative- you never disappoint! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2015 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette , a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice win, Nette. I really enjoyed your poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:03:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to this poem Nette. Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:15:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win, very beautiful and full of rhythm. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/8/2015 2:57:00 PM
Sleep will cave her trembles- what a unique image!Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2015 4:15:00 AM
- Oh ..... so beautiful in my ears !!!! - As always a pleasure to read your poems, dear Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2015 4:57:00 PM
A beautiful poem, that flows quite nicely.
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:58:00 PM
It feels soft, just like a lullaby!
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:43:00 AM
you rock dear nette, i read you and i find emotions i never knew i had..
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:05:00 AM
Your poem has made my soul fragrant with holy incense of your rhyme, nette. So powerful but so delicate. Good luck. My Topper.Your friend Rajat
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Date: 1/7/2015 7:00:00 AM
This one is a classical beauty filled with soft images that roll with the rhythm of a lullabye.
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:55:00 PM
There's sadness and wishes flickering within this poem, not only new hours but new hope...good luck my poetic friend
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:18:00 PM
Oh wow Nette, I see this as a top winner already. This is just beautiful!
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Date: 1/6/2015 4:34:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..Interesting thoughts penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2015 3:03:00 PM
Nette, tremendous way to describe love's end and spark new beginnings. Top-notch poetry!
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:35:00 PM
Another well crafted write Nette..Hope you're having a wonderful New Year!
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