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If time is not linear what does that mean with no start or end Is there no between is my past all ahead my future in the rear did I die last month will I be born next year does what I do matter has fate already dealt my hand and with no real challenges where does a man take his stand this is the challenge I face as I awaken to my inner truth the more I learned the more I realized how little I really knew.

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Date: 2/10/2018 12:51:00 PM
A certain sadness to this one - I could feel the emotion. Great read. Thank you for sharing!
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Dewayne Coleman
Date: 2/27/2018 4:25:00 AM
Your welcome. TY believe it or not I didn't notice the sadness until you pointed out. what I thought was an awakening could very well be seen as a great lose. Ignorance is bliss
Date: 2/6/2018 1:29:00 PM
Delightful poem, Dewayne. Look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Dewayne Coleman
Date: 2/27/2018 4:25:00 AM
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Date: 1/27/2018 11:13:00 PM
Love your composition You really go me thinking...
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Dewayne Coleman
Date: 2/27/2018 4:25:00 AM
smile,
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Dewayne Coleman
Date: 1/28/2018 12:25:00 AM
Ty

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