Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Haiku

Fresh Soup

two peas in a pod
add two snaps from each green bean
enough green soup for all


written 2009


Dedicated to my dear ailing friend P.D. 
**GET WELL SOON~PD..


Soup Soup Soup Contest

Written by: Carol Brown
6th Place Winner

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Skat A May 12, 2015 at 12:20 PM ANOTHER UPLIFTING HAIKU...SKAT

Sara Kendrick March 15, 2012 at 3:42 PM Congrats on your winning work...I haven't ever eaten snap bean soup even though I have added a few to my vegetable soup..Sara

Joe Maverick March 13, 2012 at 9:47 PM Just as i "thought" a win was in order Carol congratulations..

Joyce Johnson March 13, 2012 at 5:44 PM Congratulations on your Haiku win. Thanks for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2012 at 1:36 PM congrats Carol on a super win for this souper entry on PS.. luv for PD's awesome contest.. sweet one like u..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 13, 2012 at 5:58 AM Thank you all. P.D. looks like you need to share your soup with your loved ones. Hope they are both well soon. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 13, 2012 at 2:32 AM Congratulations Carol xx

Poet Destroyer A March 12, 2012 at 11:17 PM CAROL., , Congratulations! with your wonderful soup poem. I'm feeling much better now. LOL... except the folks around me. I got Nate and my granddaughter sick. SHAME ON ME! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING my contest ;-) I much enjoyed your entry, ~ always*PD

Jim Pemberton March 11, 2012 at 7:32 AM Carol, thatnk you so much for your encouraging comments and thoughtfulness! God bless you and have a wonderful day!!! Please check out my newest poems... I think you'll really enjoy them! Thanks again for everything!!! JP

Bl Devnath March 11, 2012 at 7:13 AM Your colors of ink are glorious, pens nicely and feeds well to taste. Loved always, bl

Joe Maverick March 11, 2012 at 12:08 AM I hope this soup dish will perk up P D, Carol; Enjoyed the haiku form you have made such good use of.

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2012 at 11:20 PM oh, this is a delightful and clever image, Carol!

Ryan Speir March 5, 2012 at 10:28 PM Thank you for your kind words and welcome. I look forward to sharing critiques and getting feedback.

John Loving Iii March 5, 2012 at 9:05 PM an delight for someone whos starving.

Aida Melesse March 5, 2012 at 7:05 PM It is yummy!! Thanks for serving it beautifully carol!

Russell Sivey March 5, 2012 at 3:35 PM This is a very yummy write Carol! I would love to eat your meal that you would fix! I would enjoy it a lot! Great Work!!

Jack Horne March 5, 2012 at 2:06 PM Lovely haiku, Carol

James Fraser March 5, 2012 at 1:35 PM There sure are enough poems on the Soup to go round, and the more the merrier Carol. Have a lovely evening :)

Kash Poet March 5, 2012 at 8:49 AM Lovely haiku by you Carol.Enjoyed.