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Fresh Soup

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Fresh Soup

two peas in a pod
add two snaps from each green bean
enough green soup for all
written 2009 Dedicated to my dear ailing friend P.D. **GET WELL SOON~PD.. Soup Soup Soup Contest Written by: Carol Brown 6th Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/12/2015 12:20:00 PM
ANOTHER UPLIFTING HAIKU...SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2012 3:42:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work...I haven't ever eaten snap bean soup even though I have added a few to my vegetable soup..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2012 9:47:00 PM
Just as i "thought" a win was in order Carol congratulations..
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your Haiku win. Thanks for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:36:00 PM
congrats Carol on a super win for this souper entry on PS.. luv for PD's awesome contest.. sweet one like u..
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:58:00 AM
Thank you all. P.D. looks like you need to share your soup with your loved ones. Hope they are both well soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations Carol xx
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Date: 3/12/2012 11:17:00 PM
CAROL., , Congratulations! with your wonderful soup poem. I'm feeling much better now. LOL... except the folks around me. I got Nate and my granddaughter sick. SHAME ON ME! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING my contest ;-) I much enjoyed your entry, ~ always*PD
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:32:00 AM
Carol, thatnk you so much for your encouraging comments and thoughtfulness! God bless you and have a wonderful day!!! Please check out my newest poems... I think you'll really enjoy them! Thanks again for everything!!! JP
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:13:00 AM
Your colors of ink are glorious, pens nicely and feeds well to taste. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:08:00 AM
I hope this soup dish will perk up P D, Carol; Enjoyed the haiku form you have made such good use of.
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:20:00 PM
oh, this is a delightful and clever image, Carol!
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and welcome. I look forward to sharing critiques and getting feedback.
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:05:00 PM
an delight for someone whos starving.
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:05:00 PM
It is yummy!! Thanks for serving it beautifully carol!
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Date: 3/5/2012 3:35:00 PM
This is a very yummy write Carol! I would love to eat your meal that you would fix! I would enjoy it a lot! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/5/2012 2:06:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2012 1:35:00 PM
There sure are enough poems on the Soup to go round, and the more the merrier Carol. Have a lovely evening :)
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:49:00 AM
Lovely haiku by you Carol.Enjoyed.
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