Fresh Milk

you can tell
by the smell
if its spoil
no need to boil
get it new
so here what you do
if there's no bump
look smooth a silk
its
FRESH MILK

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 23, 2012 at 1:24 PM
If we need more milk, we don't need a cow. There is a better way to get it, and here's how: We can drive or walk to the nearest store. If we have enough money, we can buy more.
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