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Fresh Earth

Mix the sand and mulch add aeration and fertilizer Dig a small hole drop in a seed and water Hopefully it will grow Into the beauty I desire Time patience and lots of water Makes the plants grow tall and strong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/28/2011 4:32:00 PM
Enjoyed the expectation in this Doris..! hope you are well..!
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:29:00 AM
The title caught my eye. I used to do a bit of gardening, but that's been abandoned along with my writing. Reading this made me smile and remember the joy of having a green thumb. Thanks for welcoming me and for reading my poem, I'm glad I was able to stir your thoughts with my words.
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Date: 3/27/2011 7:30:00 AM
I see you have not lost your touch.
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:15:00 AM
Sounds like good advice. Ponder the moment for all the good it can do. Thx. Jan
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:04:00 AM
Wisdom speaks in these lines of your poetry Doris.. luv the creation process u evoke my friend..
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:02:00 AM
Hey Doris..happy weekend ..hope all is well my friend and everyone is ddoing great.. keep in touch luv..missing your sweet comments ...
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:18:00 PM
what a beautiful write, may your plant produce plentiful
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Date: 2/24/2011 9:15:00 AM
We could apply this to us too Doris.. another uplifting piece on growth ... enjoyed..my friend..with luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 7:51:00 AM
Good luck with the gardening...I saw you and Caleb out planting on Monday..Ashley is down here..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..I still have the sniffles..Mom
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:53:00 AM
Nos you have me thinking I should be outside working on a garden, Doris. It's such a gratifying feeling to see those plants grow! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:56:00 AM
I got time and water....that other thing might be a problem tho.....Great write my friend.....Larry
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:21:00 AM
Nice prescription-menu for fresh earth , Doris
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:57:00 AM
Doris, I really enjoyed this one this afternoon. There is always hope hey? Thanks for the smiles, hope your week ahead will be a good one :)
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