Afzal Nusker Poet Quatrain

French Kiss

Unfurl the petals of flowering lips
          to quench unavoidable thirsty crave.
Invigorating nectar drools and drips
                 while bees of passion they madly behave.

               Soon the hearts become honeycomb of love
and souls get wet in romantic dribbles.
          In enthralling rapture, minds float above
     when bodies quiver by frenzied tickles.

Quote: I may not be a French but I do know how to kiss like one ;~/)


Date: 06/24/2017

Note: Entered in two different contests.
August standard contest by Brian Strand - N/A
Best rhyming poem, May-July by John Hamilton - *Placed Fourth*

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Janice Canerdy August 6, 2017 at 11:45 PM Very appealing, Afzal--CONGRATS on your win! Janice Afzal Nusker August 7, 2017 at 12:24 AM Thank you, Janice.

John Hamilton August 6, 2017 at 3:46 PM This was really well done Afzal, enjoyed your rhymes, congrats on a fine placement! Afzal Nusker August 6, 2017 at 10:39 PM Thank you very much, John.

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2017 at 9:27 PM This one is only good with the right person!!! Slobbery people . UGGGG Now let me see your OTHER kiss poem Afzal Nusker June 26, 2017 at 11:21 PM Yeah I know right.

Dale Gregory Cozart June 25, 2017 at 4:52 PM You don't have to be French to write good poetry. Nicely done. Afzal Nusker June 26, 2017 at 4:30 AM Thanks Dale :)

Maria Williams June 25, 2017 at 1:59 AM Why Afzal, you are such a romantic, and you do have a way with words. You might have been a Frenchman in your past life, you do talk like one. I enjoyed your French Kiss...Maria Afzal Nusker June 25, 2017 at 5:23 AM Thank you so much, Maria. I truly appreciate your visit and lovely comments.