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French Kiss

Unfurl the petals of flowering lips to quench unavoidable thirsty crave. Invigorating nectar drools and drips while bees of passion they madly behave. Soon the hearts become honeycomb of love and souls get wet in romantic dribbles. In enthralling rapture, minds float above when bodies quiver by frenzied tickles. Quote: I may not be a French but I do know how to kiss like one ;~/) Date: 06/24/2017 Note: Entered in two different contests. August standard contest by Brian Strand - N/A Best rhyming poem, May-July by John Hamilton - *Placed Fourth*

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Date: 8/6/2017 11:45:00 PM
Very appealing, Afzal--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:24:00 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 8/6/2017 3:46:00 PM
This was really well done Afzal, enjoyed your rhymes, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, John.
Date: 6/26/2017 9:27:00 PM
This one is only good with the right person!!! Slobbery people . UGGGG Now let me see your OTHER kiss poem
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Date: 6/26/2017 11:21:00 PM
Yeah I know right.
Date: 6/25/2017 4:52:00 PM
You don't have to be French to write good poetry. Nicely done.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/26/2017 4:30:00 AM
Thanks Dale :)
Date: 6/25/2017 1:59:00 AM
Why Afzal, you are such a romantic, and you do have a way with words. You might have been a Frenchman in your past life, you do talk like one. I enjoyed your French Kiss...Maria
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/25/2017 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maria. I truly appreciate your visit and lovely comments.

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