Larry Bradfield Poet Limerick

Freight Trains and Wine

I tried to sleep, but the trip is long
Now far from home where things went so wrong
This whole train now I call mine
My boxcar upon the line
Bottle of wine, a cork and a song

11-22-19
Contest: Five Word Challenge
Sponsor: Beth Evans

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Charles Messina December 8, 2019 at 9:22 AM Nice write, Larry. Congrats on your top win. Larry Bradfield December 8, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you, Charles!

Na Na December 8, 2019 at 8:23 AM Congrats on your winning poem Larry Larry Bradfield December 8, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you, Gregory

Reason A. Poteet December 8, 2019 at 4:41 AM Congrats, Larry, you are a natural poet. Smooth read meets the prompt perfectly. Larry Bradfield December 8, 2019 at 9:52 AM Thanks for the kind words!

Line Gauthier November 23, 2019 at 7:10 AM Enjoyed your poem, Larry. Larry Bradfield November 23, 2019 at 7:19 AM Thank you, Line