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Freight Trains and Wine

I tried to sleep, but the trip is long Now far from home where things went so wrong This whole train now I call mine My boxcar upon the line Bottle of wine, a cork and a song 11-22-19 Contest: Five Word Challenge Sponsor: Beth Evans

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Date: 12/8/2019 9:22:00 AM
Nice write, Larry. Congrats on your top win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/8/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Charles!
Date: 12/8/2019 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Larry
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/8/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory
Date: 12/8/2019 4:41:00 AM
Congrats, Larry, you are a natural poet. Smooth read meets the prompt perfectly.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/8/2019 9:52:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words!
Date: 11/23/2019 7:10:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/23/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Line

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