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Freezing - Melting

Freezing
       snow atop the majestic mountain peaks that tower above me
        will soon (as springtime in Happy Valley turns into summer) be
                                                                                                Melting

April 12, 2020 for Let The Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest
Sponsored by  Jenish Somadas

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/18/2020 7:20:00 AM

I came back to offer my Congratulations on your win. This is a lovely poem. Thank you for your visit and beautiful comment on my new poem.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/16/2020 7:04:00 PM

CONGRATS on your win with this lovely, vividly descriptive poem, Andrea. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2020 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. No more Freezing and Melting for Spring is here with birds singing. Enjoy your win and day.............

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/15/2020 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on win, Andrea. I love the contrasts on this peerless poem. Howard

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/15/2020 1:36:00 PM

Wonderful imagery.. Congrats on your great win Andrea..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/14/2020 5:35:00 PM

Just stopping by to say hello again, Sometimes our fathers are heroes sometimes its mom, sometimes sisters , glad you were close to your mom and sister, love to you xo

Judy Ball

Date: 4/14/2020 5:30:00 AM

Ah Spring. Right now it melts and then it snows and then it melts some more. Have to watch your step that you don't slip in the mud or ice. Still it's a great time of year because the trees and plants are beginning to wake and I will have my garden back soon. A nice piece. God Bless, JB

Gideon Foli

Date: 4/14/2020 3:35:00 AM

You're a great and creative writer. You inspire me a lot. Keep them coming my dear friend. Love and hugs!!!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/13/2020 9:50:00 PM

Andrea, Happy Valley, in the shadow of frozen peaks thaw. This has such a nice ring to it. I like the contrast. -Richard

David Mchattie

Date: 4/13/2020 9:03:00 PM

We still have a foot of snow in Saskatchewan and will receive more tomorrow so I await our long overdue spring. Stay well my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/13/2020 2:07:00 PM

Breathtaking verse my friend - best of luck. Blessings, Jennifer.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/13/2020 12:17:00 PM

Good one Andrea. Hugs

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/13/2020 11:13:00 AM

Beautiful antonym, Andrea good luck in the contest. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/13/2020 8:00:00 AM

Wonderfully done, Andrea. A winning poem you wrote.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2020 7:55:00 AM

A lovely antonym! I can hear the trickling of the water as it melts for Spring :) <3 Kim

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/13/2020 6:34:00 AM

I hope you had a healthy and peaceful Easter my friend, its nice to read your poetry once again, Be well and stay safe. xo

John Watt

Date: 4/12/2020 10:48:00 PM

We love our summer, don't we? I like how you put the antonyms at the far left and right, it makes sense that they are separated, right? Clever. GL to you.