Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Freesia

Green shoots start emerging from a tiny corm
vibrant flowers bloom when sun is warm
I drink in their sweet perfume
in my living room.
I adore
bright blooms
I want more
in purple and red
growing in my flower bed
freesia flowers give such delight
their jeweled colors are a glorious sight

Writing Challenge 2, June 2019- A Summer Flower- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart

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6/25/19

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John Watt June 2, 2020 at 5:00 PM Jan, I love your poem of these vibrant, bright flowers. Happy to have stumbled upon this older write today. Hope you're having a wonderful day, my friend Jan Allison June 3, 2020 at 2:40 AM You have lifted my spirits so high John I;d forgotten all about this poem! hugs jan xx

Constance La France July 11, 2019 at 8:35 PM Jan congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and I love the image too! Jan Allison June 3, 2020 at 2:39 AM Thanks Constance sorry for the delay,for some I missed replying before. the way the poem is formatted makes it look like a vase i have:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud July 9, 2019 at 4:44 PM jan, i love freesia too and your poem was lovely!...sweet congrats!... huggs Jan Allison June 3, 2020 at 2:38 AM Thanks Nette sorry for the delay,for some I missed replying before. Hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee July 8, 2019 at 2:56 PM Their jeweled colors are a glorious sight! Congrats on your win! Jan Allison June 3, 2020 at 2:37 AM Thanks Jeanne sorry for the delay,for some I missed replying before. Hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta July 7, 2019 at 11:24 PM CONGRATS to win top on this Great Poem. Love Jan Allison July 8, 2019 at 11:05 AM thanks so much Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May July 7, 2019 at 7:46 PM Wonderful write Jan...Congrats on your win.. Jan Allison July 8, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy July 7, 2019 at 12:06 PM Jan, this is lovely. CONGRATS on your win! Janice Jan Allison July 8, 2019 at 11:05 AM thanks so much Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 30, 2019 at 7:28 AM Your beautifully coloured summer flowers brighten up your page and our imagination, Jan! well done with the rhyme scheme. Hugs // paul Jan Allison July 8, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thanks so much Paul I really loved the challenge, Constance's contests inspire me to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin June 26, 2019 at 4:36 PM Beautiful Jan, glad to see you back! :) Jan Allison July 8, 2019 at 11:04 AM Thanks Tania, I am using the contest prompts to inspire me to write:-) hugs Jan xx