Freesia

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Green shoots start emerging from a tiny corm vibrant flowers bloom when sun is warm I drink in their sweet perfume in my living room. I adore bright blooms I want more in purple and red growing in my flower bed freesia flowers give such delight their jeweled colors are a glorious sight Writing Challenge 2, June 2019- A Summer Flower- Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart Checked with how many syllables 6/25/19

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John Watt

Date: 6/2/2020 5:00:00 PM

Jan, I love your poem of these vibrant, bright flowers. Happy to have stumbled upon this older write today. Hope you're having a wonderful day, my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2020 2:40:00 AM

You have lifted my spirits so high John I;d forgotten all about this poem! hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/11/2019 8:35:00 PM

Jan congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and I love the image too!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2020 2:39:00 AM

Thanks Constance sorry for the delay,for some I missed replying before. the way the poem is formatted makes it look like a vase i have:-) Hugs Jan xx