Freedom's Prison

Freedom's Prison

shadows fall on earth as sun and moon cross paths
cloaking the arrival of creatures in long range crafts
last of their kind in search of habitat
welcome to earth the name of the sneak attack
home sweet cell on a planet they now call hell
slaves to the people that they once taught too well
they just want to save us from ancient doom they brought
before brimstone is falling and sea's are red boiling hot
I cry out for someone to bring us a victory
lead us to war so we can finally set them free
let them show us the flaw in the math of our genome
so we might be saved before we lose our only home
let us not make martyrs of both fate and destiny
chose the right path and save ourselves from humanity
there's only one chance step up and join the cause
an army of those who take pride in having flaws
free-will is not free it cost more than anything
for those who bear all the pain of its suffering
don't cry to the sky and ask what god's gonna do
he gave you a voice now the rest of it's up to you
  AT THIS HOUR MY TIP TO ALL MY PEOPLE OF EART IS REMEBER ONE VOICE IS THE ANSWER TO ANY PROBLEM AS LONG AS IT SPEAKS IN TRUTH  SINCERLY THE IZ
I AM THE IZ THE REAZON THAT IZ SOME PEOPLE SHOULDN'T HAVE KIDZ

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/14/2012 3:33:00 PM
Interesting work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth Hour" contest Jeremy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2012 3:39:00 AM
Jeremy congrats on your win..David
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