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Freedoms Price

Bodies raining down A nations heart ripped open Savage flames assail Tomorrows, lost in ashes The blade of hate has spoken The stain of 9/11 will be forever in our hearts. It was the day a vicious wound was inflicted on our nation. We staggered, but did not fall. We survived. We are America.

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Date: 9/15/2011 4:08:00 PM
Many congratulations to you, Bob : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Jack
Date: 9/15/2011 12:55:00 PM
bodies raining down - very powerful. i thought about people jumping when i was writing mine too. super ending too. congrats on your win :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 4:09:00 PM
Liked yours just the way it was. Thanks for the kudos
Date: 9/15/2011 5:04:00 AM
My favorite line..."The blade of hate has spoken" Congratulations on your 9th Place win my friend. CR
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:15:00 AM
Thank you for your comments Caryl
Date: 9/15/2011 1:03:00 AM
Excellent poem, Bob. I agree it was a horrendous situation. It was certainly as a result of hate, New York rose to the occasion and supported each other. America survived and we are glad you did. THere were 3000 people lost and some of those lost were Canadian and British, we felt for your pain and we lost lives with you. Well done. Lee
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:17:00 AM
We're all in this together Lee. Hate does not differentiate. Thanks for your much appreciated comments.
Date: 9/15/2011 12:29:00 AM
go, bob..sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:18:00 AM
Much appreciated nette
Date: 9/14/2011 9:28:00 PM
The worse part was thoes bodies raining down,Bob. Congratulations on your worthy poetry. Agape, Moses
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:18:00 AM
And thanks to you for the kudos
Date: 9/14/2011 8:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Bob! Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 9/14/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Carolyn, Bob
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr Ram
Date: 9/14/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your wonderful win luv.. superb piece...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/15/2011 10:20:00 AM
Very much appreciate your congrats Linda-Marie
Date: 9/14/2011 3:33:00 PM
The unimaginable happened. It was hard to take in. Congratulations Bob, on your win. Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/14/2011 4:10:00 PM
And to you on your well deserved first place
Date: 9/14/2011 3:13:00 PM
hey Bob congrats on your win..David
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/14/2011 4:11:00 PM
And to you David. Well done
Date: 9/14/2011 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/14/2011 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 9/14/2011 2:20:00 PM
Bob, it really was like a blade of hate cutting into the hearts of people throughout the nation. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries, so take pride in your achievement. Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/14/2011 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for honoring my effort with your placement. Let's hope we never have to face another day like that.
Date: 9/12/2011 12:16:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece Bob...thanks so much for sharing
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/12/2011 10:12:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated. Chiquita
Date: 9/11/2011 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Bob from the bottom of my heart. Going to my favorites. Hope you have entered this in Carolyn's contest. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/11/2011 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Carol. Your comments are much appreciated. And yes, I did.
Date: 9/10/2011 7:52:00 PM
Wow.. This is probably my favorite poem I have ever read on this website. Favorite poem and favorite poet. Thankyou for this. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/10/2011 11:45:00 PM
And thank you Dana'lynn for your kind comments. Very much appreciated.
Date: 9/10/2011 5:20:00 PM
Powerful words and graphic visuals! Wow! Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/10/2011 11:45:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 9/10/2011 4:01:00 PM
Freedom's Price is a perfect title Bob! Inspirational note at the bottom...CR
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/10/2011 4:36:00 PM
I pray we never relive it. Thanks for the comments Caryl

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