Freedom Without Discipline

Spurning Russia’s repression
   or China’s suppression
What’s left to stop
   America’s digression

The Church lost its hold
  Morality put on a blindfold
Freedom without discipline
  produced violence internecine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 3:09 PM
I think the church "lost its hold" because it engaged in politics, which is a dark enterprise. A church should stick to helping with spiritual guidance and not allow the evil of politics in. Sad.
Wolf Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 8:22 PM
I think that the Church's teachings have to be relevant, without changing the texts or pandering to the mood of the moment. In other words, for today's questions, the Church has to provide approaches and answers that are steeped in the wisdom of the past. That ain't easy to do. :) gw
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 9:44 PM
No one wins. I agree. Makes me want to stop watching the news entirely. Excellent use of verbiage to express the mess we are in. Outstanding Gershon. Blessings xxoo
Wolf Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 10:19 AM
I guess perhaps we all should put on the blindfold when the news comes on, at least sometimes. It's so repetitive -- for years and decades now. Thanks, Connie. Cheers, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 5:08 PM
Certainly, some apt food for thought here, gw. Thanks!
Wolf Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Just don't overeat (or over-cerebate) now, Milt. lol. Thank you, Gershon
Summers Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 4:21 PM
“Freedom without discipline,” pretty much sums it up. Good stuff. John
Wolf Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, John!
Baker Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 4:20 PM
I agree, Gershon. We seem to be heading in the wrong direction in the U.S.A. Thanks for the thoughtful poem. Bill
Wolf Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Hope we can turn it around, Bill. :) gw
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace