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Freedom Gives Itself Away

Everytime i think i am hiding hiding from experience the thought flow forever blinding captive in its omnipresence certain paths have no finding beware of any convergence a rigid view forever binding. Seek to witness truth in beauty witness the beauty in truth a bite of apple can prove fruity each natural chunk holds proof change perception alter reality experience the magnitude of truth don’t assert the definition of congeniality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/20/2010 8:44:00 AM
Flowery and beautiful, what a wonderf flow , message and imagery, good work. Congrats on being featured .Judy Riley
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Date: 2/17/2010 11:06:00 AM
Thanks for all of your comments, however some critisism be it constructive or destructive is always welcomed.
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:20:00 AM
Lance, Congratulations on yopur poem feature this week. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the feature....:JP]
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:45:00 PM
Lance, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lance. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:23:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/7/2009 9:35:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Lance. ;) it's nice to read you...
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