Freedom Gives Itself Away

Everytime i think i am hiding
hiding from experience 
the thought flow forever blinding
captive in its omnipresence 
certain paths have no finding
beware of any convergence
a rigid view forever binding.
Seek to witness truth in beauty
witness the beauty in truth
a bite of apple can prove fruity
each natural chunk holds proof
change perception alter reality
experience the magnitude of truth
don’t assert the definition of congeniality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Riley Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Flowery and beautiful, what a wonderf flow , message and imagery, good work. Congrats on being featured .Judy Riley
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February 17, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Thanks for all of your comments, however some critisism be it constructive or destructive is always welcomed.
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February 17, 2010 at 7:20 AM
Lance, Congratulations on yopur poem feature this week. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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February 16, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations on the feature....:JP]
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February 15, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Lance, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James
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February 15, 2010 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lance. Love, Carol
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February 14, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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November 7, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Welcome to the Soup Lance. ;) it's nice to read you...
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