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As the clear light rises higher Illuminating fog Humidity from Friday's rain. Thicker down in the bog Ole hound dog is baying a prey He yelps for hours today I don't understand how he sees Even a squirrel at play Ole hound dog uses his sense of smell To get that squirrel treed Then in the quietness I hear Another dog answers his plead The fog quite heavy in low places The dove's coos vibrate on There is something unsettling Maybe not as active in tone That hound is getting annoying He needs a little nap The roosters can hardly be heard To bridge musical gap The sound of a hummingbird is brief As he seeks some flowers Drink nectar to sate his appetite Though no hibiscus bower Hibiscus a delicious meal Now bees come in burst or waves To feed from begonias and moss Their buzz is heard then fades My hands are hurting as I write Even with arthritis cream Which does seem to ease the pain Freedom only a dream God grant me the insight to seek The Great Physician, and not complain Unlock my heart to the beauty here And anchored in You remain.
2 Corinthians 4: 16 (NET) Therefore, we do not despair, but even if our physical body is wearing away, our inner person is being renewed day by day. 2 Corinthians 4:14-16 Amplified Bible 14 knowing that He who raised the Lord Jesus will also raise us with Jesus and will present us [along] with you in His presence. 15 For all [these] things are for your sake, so that as [God’s remarkable, undeserved] grace reaches to more and more people it may increase thanksgiving, to the glory of [our great] God. 16 Therefore we do not become discouraged [spiritless, disappointed, or afraid]. Though our outer self is [progressively] wasting away, yet our inner self is being [progressively] renewed day by day. Written: July 2, 2022

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Date: 7/4/2022 5:05:00 AM
O! What a poem! Great! Congratulations!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/5/2022 12:44:00 PM
Alex, Thank you for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 7/3/2022 10:52:00 AM
Sara, this is such a beautiful, reverent poem. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/4/2022 4:17:00 AM
I am glad you liked it. Sara
Date: 7/3/2022 8:22:00 AM
I enjoy reading your poetry Sara :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/4/2022 4:15:00 AM
Thank you, P.M. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 7/3/2022 6:10:00 AM
There is comfort in God’s creation! God bless and congratulations, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/3/2022 6:48:00 AM
Kim, Thank you for dropping by and letting me know I placed in the contest. Sara
Date: 7/2/2022 10:53:00 AM
The maturation process is painful, but as you have so eloquently explained, we take some solace in the scenic scenery that surrounds us. You skillfully immerse the reader in the spectacular scenery that you witnessed in the beauty of nature. Blessings dear friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2022 2:32:00 PM
Sotto, I need all the blessings I can get. Your thoughtfulness in visiting and taking time to comment on my work is encouraging. Sara
Date: 7/2/2022 6:45:00 AM
You take the reader to the sights and sounds you experienced in realm of nature. Aging does pain, but we find comfort in our beautiful surroundings as you so expertly convey. Hope you feel better soon.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2022 1:43:00 PM
Vijay, I agree aging brings on pain in so many ways. I appreciate the thoughtful comments you have made. Sara
Date: 7/2/2022 6:01:00 AM
Nature is beautiful and we remember it was created by God. Suffering come and go. It is our destiny, Yet we aim high to achieve Heaven. Blessings.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2022 1:26:00 PM
Victor, Yes, suffering comes and goes, or the person goes on to much better place then pain is eliminated. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Thanks for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara

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