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1st place in 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 3, Sponsor Mark Toney
2nd place in  'Flight Two' Poetry Premiere Contest, Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Premiere Contest WinnerFreedom Flight

He stood shivering in the biting cold
Shreds of dirty, flimsy clothes clung to his frame
All around his fellow skeletons huddled
Waiting for the inevitable walk to that sinister place

His wait had been longer than most
He had been subjected to terrible cruelty
He had seen all of his friends and family go
Yet in his mind he had remained free

His physical torment seemed detached when lost in his memories
His little girl chasing her puppy in the bright sunshine
Friends and relatives around the festive table laughing, chatting, eating
Walking hand-in-hand with his beloved around the moonlight lake

But the freezing wind jolted him back to the hellish reality
He looked towards the barbed-wire fence which bounded his world
There sat on the top wire was a little bird
It sang the sweetest of tunes seemingly just for him

It looked at him as it sang with such innocence
And then with a flutter of its tiny wings
It swooped towards him, turned and glided back over the fence
It pecked at the hard earth before flying into the woods beyond

He knew it was his time
Into that building he trudged
But he had a strange sense of elation
Closing his eyes at last he was free

The morning light shone brightly
The little bird was at his side
It guided him on as they soared through the sky
With the shackles of hell cast aside freedom now prevailed

He and the little bird would never go back to that place again

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To commemorate the liberation of Auschwitz on 27 January 1945.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 8:54 AM
Dear Simon, I'm not surprised to see this powerfully moving poem on the podium yet again. It just gets more potent, more soulful and more meaningful with every read. Brilliant use of emotive and evocative imagery! It's an honor to share the podium with you once again, my poet friend. Personally, I think this poem should have placed higher. Congratulations for your success in Seth's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:34 PM
Beautifully crafted poem. Added to my FAVE's. Congrats on your fine finish in Mark's Marathon, Simon.
Rogerson Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Line
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:28 AM
Back with congrats. This is one of my favorites of the story type poems. Congrats on the marathon overall
Rogerson Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:53 AM
Thanks Andrea. Those long established poets in Poetry Soup, like yourself, are an inspiration to us all. Best wishes Simon
Toney Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 3:07 PM
Simon, congratulations on your Top 15 placement in my 2025 Poetry Marathon FINAL! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 37 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post. Time to take off those running shoes and give those feet a rest!
Rogerson Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 1:52 AM
Thanks Mark - this has been such a wondeful contest and to have been placed is beyond anything I imagined!
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Oh wow. I just knew this had to be a concentration camp. Congrats on trophy win
Rogerson Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 10:39 PM
Thanks Andrea
Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Dear Simon, it was an honor to reread this profound powerhouse poetry once again. Even more poignant and potent the second time around. Deeply moving through vivid yet tender evocative and emotive imagery. Your last line is such a stirring and impactful finale to an exquisite piece. Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Mark's contest. So well-deserved! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rogerson Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:59 AM
Dear Susan, Many thanks for your very kind words. As the world is in such turmoil we must always remember. My poem, The Winding Road carries the same message. You might like to read that also. Best wishes Simon
Velasco Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:06 AM
This is so powerful and moving. The imagery of the little bird really got to me — such a beautiful symbol of hope and freedom. A touching tribute to those who endured so much.
Rogerson Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 6:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Rowena
Daniels Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Excellent commémoration write, Simon. The illustration of the guidance of the bird is so profound. THANKYOU 4 posting & congrats on win. Blessings.
Rogerson Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 1:04 AM
Thank you Ghairo
Toney Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Simon, congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 3 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Your poem is both poignant and inspirational. A Fav poem for me. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 4 has already started.
Rogerson Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 1:04 AM
Hi Mark - Many thanks and I am delighted to have got a first place. I've put my running shoes on and submitted for Mile 4 - just noticed no illustrations so I have removed the one I had for my poem The Real Pilgrim.
Alex Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 1:09 AM
Beautiful narration of a rather serious event and emotions. Congratulations!
Rogerson Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thanks Christuraj. I feel it is important to write about such serious events so people remember.
Ashley Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 5:41 PM
Dear Simon, such a brilliant title crowns this harrowing poem. The haunting imagery, desperate emotions and spiritual symbolism all combine to create an intimate portrait of an Auschwitz prisoner. A heartrending piece that reaches in with a potent ache to the depths of my heart. The freedom gained in your last line is an impactful grand finale. Congratulations for your excellent in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rogerson Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Dear Susan, Many thanks for your kind words. I wanted to write a commemorative poem having been to Auschwitz as well as holocaust museums in Warsaw and Jerusalem. I am so pleased you found my poem fitting. Simon
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Have a great/blessed~~ day/weekend writing away.........................
Rogerson Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Thanks Paula
Noble Ayi Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 7:00 AM
Sure, freedom is needed in every aspect of our lives. You really brought the picture of the persona and his feelings. Keep it up
Michael Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 1:58 AM
Well done...You described the cross over...
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