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1st place in 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 3, Sponsor Mark Toney
2nd place in  'Flight Two' Poetry Premiere Contest, Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke

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He stood shivering in the biting cold
Shreds of dirty, flimsy clothes clung to his frame
All around his fellow skeletons huddled
Waiting for the inevitable walk to that sinister place

His wait had been longer than most
He had been subjected to terrible cruelty
He had seen all of his friends and family go
Yet in his mind he had remained free

His physical torment seemed detached when lost in his memories
His little girl chasing her puppy in the bright sunshine
Friends and relatives around the festive table laughing, chatting, eating
Walking hand-in-hand with his beloved around the moonlight lake

But the freezing wind jolted him back to the hellish reality
He looked towards the barbed-wire fence which bounded his world
There sat on the top wire was a little bird
It sang the sweetest of tunes seemingly just for him

It looked at him as it sang with such innocence
And then with a flutter of its tiny wings
It swooped towards him, turned and glided back over the fence
It pecked at the hard earth before flying into the woods beyond

He knew it was his time
Into that building he trudged
But he had a strange sense of elation
Closing his eyes at last he was free

The morning light shone brightly
The little bird was at his side
It guided him on as they soared through the sky
With the shackles of hell cast aside freedom now prevailed

He and the little bird would never go back to that place again

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To commemorate the liberation of Auschwitz on 27 January 1945.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/9/2025 1:23:00 PM
Oh wow. I just knew this had to be a concentration camp. Congrats on trophy win
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 8/9/2025 10:39:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 8/9/2025 9:09:00 AM
Dear Simon, it was an honor to reread this profound powerhouse poetry once again. Even more poignant and potent the second time around. Deeply moving through vivid yet tender evocative and emotive imagery. Your last line is such a stirring and impactful finale to an exquisite piece. Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Mark's contest. So well-deserved! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 8/9/2025 9:59:00 AM
Dear Susan, Many thanks for your very kind words. As the world is in such turmoil we must always remember. My poem, The Winding Road carries the same message. You might like to read that also. Best wishes Simon
Date: 8/7/2025 5:06:00 AM
This is so powerful and moving. The imagery of the little bird really got to me — such a beautiful symbol of hope and freedom. A touching tribute to those who endured so much.
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 8/7/2025 6:00:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Rowena
Date: 8/6/2025 6:17:00 PM
Excellent commémoration write, Simon. The illustration of the guidance of the bird is so profound. THANKYOU 4 posting & congrats on win. Blessings.
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 8/7/2025 1:04:00 AM
Thank you Ghairo
Date: 8/6/2025 3:45:00 PM
Simon, congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 3 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Your poem is both poignant and inspirational. A Fav poem for me. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 4 has already started.
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 8/7/2025 1:04:00 AM
Hi Mark - Many thanks and I am delighted to have got a first place. I've put my running shoes on and submitted for Mile 4 - just noticed no illustrations so I have removed the one I had for my poem The Real Pilgrim.
Date: 6/25/2022 1:09:00 AM
Beautiful narration of a rather serious event and emotions. Congratulations!
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/25/2022 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj. I feel it is important to write about such serious events so people remember.
Date: 6/24/2022 5:41:00 PM
Dear Simon, such a brilliant title crowns this harrowing poem. The haunting imagery, desperate emotions and spiritual symbolism all combine to create an intimate portrait of an Auschwitz prisoner. A heartrending piece that reaches in with a potent ache to the depths of my heart. The freedom gained in your last line is an impactful grand finale. Congratulations for your excellent in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/25/2022 9:29:00 AM
Dear Susan, Many thanks for your kind words. I wanted to write a commemorative poem having been to Auschwitz as well as holocaust museums in Warsaw and Jerusalem. I am so pleased you found my poem fitting. Simon
Date: 6/24/2022 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Have a great/blessed~~ day/weekend writing away.........................
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/25/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Paula
Date: 6/18/2020 7:00:00 AM
Sure, freedom is needed in every aspect of our lives. You really brought the picture of the persona and his feelings. Keep it up
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Date: 1/27/2020 1:58:00 AM
Well done...You described the cross over...
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