Freedom Fire

From folly’s flaw, for truth I fled fiercely fueled, freely faith*-led… …feeling flared, fearing falling forward faring, fully unfailing… …firstly fixed, reinforced to follow fairly framed for fulfillment-flow... ...freedom from God of salvation-flight feast of my soul from hell-fight's fright,
*Hebrews 11:6 But without faith it is impossible to please him: for he that cometh to God must believe that he is, and that he is a rewarder of them that diligently seek him. January 20, 2020 (Rhyme with alliteration) Honorable Mention, "Twist my Tongue" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter; judged on 1/21/2020.
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Lamoureux Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:06 AM
A good twister, congrats on your placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Congrats on your win, Beata. I thought you did the challenge very well.
Somadas Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:16 AM
lol... Tough one.. A tongue twister with rhyme and alliteration.. Marvelous.. If my tongue didn't come back to normal, I will sue you...lol..
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