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Freedom, Feigned

Confinement - I carry my prison with me no bounds or bars or barriers can equal the breadth of my bondage its burning poison possesses marrow and mind squeezing the emotion and energy from every cell and sinew. Truth be told it is a cell I walked into with knowledge and bitter wisdom and the lone latchkey hides very deep in my own pocket.
Submitted on September 13, 2018 To the "September Premiere 2018" Poetry Contest Brian Strand, Sponsor
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Breedt Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Hi Greg . The last line is a KO. So apt. Cleverly contrived my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 4:59 PM
There are so many who can relate to this kind of prison. Wonderfully expressed Greg. Congratulations on your win! : )
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:03 AM
I believe you are correct, Connie ... most of us are self-confining in some way. Thanks and blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Well penned, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:02 AM
Many thanks to you, Line! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 7:45 PM
So sad, deep, dark, and very powerfully written, Greg. We all are our own prisoners in one way or another, and our 'latchkey' can be close, but yet too far to reach at times. Another fave, and congratulations on your placement. Sandra <3
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:02 AM
You are so right, Sandra, I agree completely! And thank you so much for the wonderful comments ... as always, Sweet One! :-) <3
Faulkner Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:44 PM
So true, self-confinement is the most insidious, very insightful!
Barden Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Indeed, Michelle, and I think most of us have our own little prisons. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
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