Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Freedom Bound

As far as the eye can see, thunder roars with such fury in the horizon.
Beneath the sea sculpturing deep tints and shades of blue, briny crystallizing.
The tide draws away and breathes its curse.
Articulating its exaltation moving force,
manifesting and mesmerizing.


Bout gaits end with the striking off sound.
Airborne when all four are off the ground.
Breeze laced through his mane with pride.
Feeling the cold embrace, he draws a breath with every stride.
As the rain caress, fire burns inside, free its soul bound.

7/20/2016

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Two Stanzas - Two Only - Poetry Contest 
 Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Scott Thirtyseven August 2, 2016 at 8:24 AM I though this read like a winner; congratulations.

Joanna Daniel July 27, 2016 at 12:33 AM Splendid write that beautifully complements the image:) Congratulations on your top spot, Eve:)

Charlie Smith July 26, 2016 at 11:15 AM Excellent piece Eve, congratulations...

Alexis Y. July 26, 2016 at 9:05 AM Hi Eve, Congrats on your top win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis

Teddy Kimathi July 26, 2016 at 5:28 AM Congrats Eve, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Karam Misra July 26, 2016 at 4:52 AM I can feel the thundering of the hoofs as the free spirit gallops away! And it's true that all four feet get off the ground in a gallop.Congrats on your top spot, Eve. ~karam~

Laura Leiser July 26, 2016 at 12:04 AM Congrats on your win, Eve! Brilliant write :)

Bl Devnath July 25, 2016 at 9:36 PM Congrats on your great win my friend. Hugs, bl

Anisha Dutta July 25, 2016 at 7:23 PM feeling so happy to see you on top place. congrats and hugs

Sandra Haight July 25, 2016 at 4:39 PM Eve, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'two stanzas' contest. A beautiful poem about a beautiful animal! Hugs, Sandra

Sara Chansarkar July 25, 2016 at 3:31 PM Fabulous piece Eve,each word seems so perfectly handpicked!Congratulations!

Jan Allison July 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM amazing imagery Eve congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior July 25, 2016 at 3:11 PM Congrats! Eve on your fabulous win...god bless...^WW^

Beautiful Scars July 25, 2016 at 3:05 PM Eve, a wonderful poem you have written here lovely lady! congrats on your 1st place, well deserved :)-luloo

Lin Lane July 25, 2016 at 2:50 PM Congratulations to you, Eve. I love sharing this win with you. You know I love horses.

Vera Duggan July 22, 2016 at 8:05 PM Oh! Eve how lovely is this poem, if you don't win there is something wrong because it is brilliant and boy what a subject, one of the most beautiful animals in this world, loved it, take care my friend........Vera

Scott Thirtyseven July 22, 2016 at 3:26 AM Captivating words, beautiful picture. Love this wonderful association.

David Smith July 21, 2016 at 7:43 PM You use your gold tipped pen to describe in such lavish style what most of us find hard to even see. Thank you for those rare and beautiful glimpses and secret promises. This one has certain passion, the last more playful. You do both well. David (a fellow traveller along the poetry way)

Alexis Y. July 21, 2016 at 1:15 PM Hi Eve, You've created a beauty. It was a pleasure to read this lovely write. Good luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Ravi Sathasivam July 21, 2016 at 7:57 AM Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Wendy Rycroft July 21, 2016 at 7:12 AM Well written beautiful poem x

Probir Gupta July 21, 2016 at 6:55 AM Just Classic ... Sure to win not just the contest but many a heart as well ...

Demetrios Trifiatis July 21, 2016 at 5:17 AM Captivating imagery that makes the heart gallop dear, Eve. Good luck!