Freedom and My Life With You

I want freedom
To go anywhere
And fly high
To search the world around
To go deeper
Without anybody noticing me
I want to escape the world’s discrimination

I want to be with my love till eternity
Spend time together
Working side by side
Loving each other
Making kids
And creating a memories that last
Without the world around

But I know there’s no such eternity in loving
Relationships may fall down
And can be broken down
I’m afraid I can’t save it
When the storms comes and the wind blows madly
I know how cruel the world is
To condemn us, while we’re struggling

I hate to be one of them
I know one thing we, I can do
To live a day at a time
And flow free
Like the wind
So release me from the shackles of uncertainty
And plant me to a secure soil…where I can grow

Let me blow your face away
And shake cruelty in me
Because I’m surrounded by it
I may be contaminated by such dirt in my heart
Let me free from all of these
Like the wind in your face
Smoothly touching your soft cheeks

Let me shiver
With your love
By your Grace
And the salvation you bring forth
From now till eternity
Hold my hand, embrace me with your love
For in it… freedom will fill my heart


*Created By: Michael Hilario with Stephanie G. B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/23/2012 12:56:00 PM
A lovely poem about freedom, I like it very much. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Michael Hilario
Date: 11/24/2012 10:30:00 AM
Thanks Anne for liking the poetry. I wrote that poetry with a help from my friend long time ago. I's such fun to love and have the freedom to do what you want without that fear whether people will like what you're doing or not.
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