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Freedom and Justice, My Spirit

Freedom, equality and brotherhood
In the french revolution had happen should
But simply led to build a guillotine.
Not even Robespierre his head save could.

Newborn people of world has a bloodline
Which marks her/him to be ugly or fine
No equality or brotherhood are acting now
No real freedom or Justice can destine.

It’s time to change and reach a splendid glow
The hateful racism outlaw to throw
We are all equal, free and fraternal too
It’s time for mankind a spiritual grow.

(This is for "My spirit" contest: verses are the same of a previous poem of mine adapted to the contest, because this is my spirit)

Copyright © Mario De Paz | Year Posted 2015

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Kp Nunez Date: 5/28/2015 4:43:00 AM Such a fine write, sire. A 7. Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Had to catch up with many contest results released one after another. Login to Reply Mario De Paz Date: 5/28/2015 10:31:00 AM Thank you Kim, don't worry about late commenting. It is always a pleasure to hear from you and visit too

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2015 1:18:00 PM Hello Mario, Congratulations on your win. Love LINDA Login to Reply Mario De Paz Date: 5/23/2015 5:51:00 AM Thank you, my spirit is with you

Jan Allison Date: 5/19/2015 2:41:00 PM Wise words indeed i especially love the final stanza:-) Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mario De Paz Date: 5/20/2015 11:30:00 AM Thank you Jan, you are very kind indeed

Skat A Date: 5/19/2015 1:55:00 PM Mario, congratulations on your spirit win poem. SKAT love :) Login to Reply Mario De Paz Date: 5/20/2015 11:31:00 AM Hello Skat! Thank you for coming and congratulations