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Freedom and Justice, My Spirit

Freedom, equality and brotherhood In the french revolution had happen should But simply led to build a guillotine. Not even Robespierre his head save could. Newborn people of world has a bloodline Which marks her/him to be ugly or fine No equality or brotherhood are acting now No real freedom or Justice can destine. It’s time to change and reach a splendid glow The hateful racism outlaw to throw We are all equal, free and fraternal too It’s time for mankind a spiritual grow. (This is for "My spirit" contest: verses are the same of a previous poem of mine adapted to the contest, because this is my spirit)

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Date: 5/28/2015 4:43:00 AM
Such a fine write, sire. A 7. Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Had to catch up with many contest results released one after another.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/28/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim, don't worry about late commenting. It is always a pleasure to hear from you and visit too
Date: 5/22/2015 1:18:00 PM
Hello Mario, Congratulations on your win. Love LINDA
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/23/2015 5:51:00 AM
Thank you, my spirit is with you
Date: 5/19/2015 2:41:00 PM
Wise words indeed i especially love the final stanza:-) Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/20/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Jan, you are very kind indeed
Date: 5/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
Mario, congratulations on your spirit win poem. SKAT love :)
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/20/2015 11:31:00 AM
Hello Skat! Thank you for coming and congratulations

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