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Freedom

I was shot into a vacuum, Only to see been entangled by a bond. In this state I cried days and nights, Kicking with my feet and stretching my arms, But all efforts were met with a wall enclosing my freedom. When shall I be free became my daily song, Second runs into minutes, then hours, Hours turns to days, while days became months. Ninth month came, then my cry became a public broadcast. Welcome to our world shouted the parents, But my cry was I am free at last. Freedom! I am set free.

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Date: 12/1/2024 11:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/29/2017 10:54:00 AM
What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 7/18/2017 3:32:00 AM
Great metaphor for being born. I love it. Well written. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 7/17/2017 6:19:00 PM
Beautiful. Welldone.
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