Freedom

Free By Amber Talwar When we did not get freedom with pain we were numb we so much cowed down we became dumb leaders toiled and the results have come Soon after freedom our memories turned weak forgot the too meek he who taught us peace to put everything at ease Non-violence he preached till he did cease Doing so we got freedom with ease He sweat ,for our freedom was in threat Leaders of the past we never met Fruits of their labour we now get Thank you men of substance of the past for us you observed a fast You told us to forget the cast in your mould I hope we were cast

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 6/30/2017 9:26:00 PM

Thank you Fuming I'm glad you decided to read it. I will now read your work. It's good to know more n more poets on the way of your writing.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 9:12:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/28/2017 9:47:00 AM

Welcome my new friend to our poetic family which aspires you to stay here for long time! Every effort to express our feelings and thoughts in a poetic way is praiseworthy and so is yours! Good luck my friend in your poetic quest! Very nicely written dear friend, Bawa! !

Bawa Talwar
Date: 6/28/2017 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios. I read a no. Of your works and simply love them.you r 2good . Yours is the kind of writing quality that I desire can u tell me how to improve as to win POTD.

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/28/2017 7:49:00 AM

Nicely written ... very positive sentiments ... inspiring too ... BUT what is fREEDOM? ...

Bawa Talwar
Date: 6/28/2017 6:28:00 PM

Thank you for your opinion. Probir here freedom of the country from the British.