Freedom

What makes the word a good place, is that you have lots of freedond.Freedom is 
great you can walk out of you own frount door whit out i soldure shooting at you 
know one trying to take you own land. I repect the freedom that I have. 

God gave us lots of freedom in this world. i have respect in that.
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May 17, 2009 at 2:09 PM
This is such an excellent poem. It flow with such grace and reverence. I really like the essence of the piece and the praise it brings. Great job! ~Joseph
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