Freedom

I took my own chains off
Off with the hurt,
hurt shall not break,
break from work,
work will be fun,
fun is pure,
pure intentions lead,
lead a soul to truth
truth shows who am I
I took my own chains off.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Quigley Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:04 PM
The chaining/blitz form gives this one some real energy.
Smith Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Close to a Blitz poem where the poem just takes you on a ride and you don't know where you will end up.
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