Freedom

dear 'lovin' parents im taking my leave of you we'll see if you really miss me im done with all the hurt you inflict even though i dont have any scars on the outside i have them where it matters most im taking my freedom out of your hands and doin something for myself to actually accomplish what i want to do in life without havin your reproving eyes condem me everytime i come home from school, im tired of all the names you call me and the things you tell the other kids about me so thank you for my freedom and have a nice life of being control freaks and hypocrits. i have my freedom in my grasp so this is goodbye

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2012 7:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Ashlee. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2012 1:17:00 PM

Very expressive and emotive work..Must be hard not having the people that are most important in your life to validate you..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2012 8:22:00 AM

Ashlee, wow... I was only 14 when I gained all the freedom in the world... It was tough...fun but tough.... I did not have the above problems..I was just an out of control freak... No one could sustain me... I hope this is just a poem...but,only you know why you need the freedom..I can relate in some ways...pd