Freedom

I once saw this beautiful bird,

flying in the sky.

It looked down at me mockingly,

as if to say I am free.

I looked back with envy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Olomi Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Personally, I envy flying birds because I feel Freedom belongs to them. Thank you for reminding me that, Sheryl. Welcome to Poetrysoup!
Pettit Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Plenty of descriptiveness in relatively few words. This is an impressive output.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 9:34 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today and interesting theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. with luv..
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