FREEDOM

Pure, toned lightness gentles
life’s punched bruises, revives
to rejuvenate.

Whispered peace mingled with a
soft breeze swishes nirvana
feel on tingling skin.

Optimistic infinity 
adorned in bright, wonder-filled
confident twinkles.

Makes me high, so high above
daily fair, I long to stay where
I can breathe His truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Crandall Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 8:20 AM
What a great feeling - congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 8:04 AM
Wow. Way to go on Brian's winner list. Congrats, Caycay. Hope we can talk sometime
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest CayCay!
Hind Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 5:31 PM
Love this!! Good luck!! <3
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Your beautiful poem struck a chord with me, CayCay. I love last verse, and the complete abandon to God's will. I hope your evening is nice. :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 12:20 PM
If only more people wanted to breathe His truth. Way to go, CayCay. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 11:33 AM
Hi CayCay, your prism touched me at a mystical depth with "confident twinkles." I love the last stanza. Truly we are at the height of freedom when we soar in "His truth" that indeed does make of free and unencumbers our lives. Each one of your stanzas is such a visceral experience of freedom! Best wishes for the contest. So fun to have a flying partner! Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 11:13 AM
Fantabulous, Caycay. Hope it scores for you. I left a few more soupies. I have one more now.
Rodgers Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 9:26 AM
Dear CayCay, I love how you let freedom feel tactile here, as if something were brushing the skin and waking the heart to truth. A soft, hopeful rise. Beautiful! Winter Blessings, CayCay Daniel
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