Freedom

That sad lament flickering through her day
Buried deep, but not deep enough
Folded flag, a reminder of the love never returned
Death the escape, but still the prisoner
Married to the ego
Maybe both
The beauty queen, ugly inside
She heard the words. One ego, that’s a bang. Two egos, that’s an explosion.
He would wait for her, he liked the ugly side
How did he know the ending
She didn’t know, and she was living it
The flags, the medals, the shiny crown
He threw his in the river, went back to his old life
She didn’t understand how he could do that
He was part of it
They were all part of it
She was kidding herself
Like the crown that defined her
Living on memories
Waiting out time
She wanted life
The war hero’s widow
They would put that on her gravestone
She began to understand him now
He was free
He’d won his war
Now he was waiting for her to win hers
Her own freedom
The sun was shining the day she handed the flag and medals to his mum
The walk over the bridge would finally set her free
The crown didn’t make much of a splash
No bang, no explosion
Just so much more
He liked her ugly side
She liked that just fine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 2:30 AM
Good Morning Paul. Yes, the only thing right with death is freedom. Freedom from illness pain a tormented mind and more. You have named your entry well and never strayed. Thank you once again for sharing your skilled poetic talent. I can relate to your entry and words and I believe your other readers can too. Have a wonderful day. Blessings and Peace (smile)
Puddifoot Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:54 AM
no winners in war..we seem to have perpetual war on this planet - i have a 'stop the war' sign in my front window, and the fact i never take it down is sad testimony to that
Bell Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:42 AM
The sad thing is. A.I, will take war to such a level that nobody will survive. Probably man's fate from the beginning.
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