Freedom

I may have put you on a throne And my feelings may run deep But your story is yours to own Your freedom, yours to keep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawton Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:39 AM
Ain't that the truth. Nice write JEFF. short and simply the way i like them!
Martin Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Thank you :)
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 3:00 PM
So much said in so few words..Loved reading the entire stanza, but especially the last two lines..well articulated, Jeff!
Martin Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Vijay :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Hello Jeff Martin,it is nice to meet you. I like the way you wrote this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Have a nice day my friend.
Martin Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Nice to meet you too. Thank you, thank you, and thank you. Have a good day :)
Buck Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Jeff: I needed a bit more background to understand this one. Maybe as I read your earlier works I will gain the knowledge I lack. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Martin Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:53 PM
I know someone. And she is strong-willed and independent.
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