Freedom

I may have put you on a throne And my feelings may run deep But your story is yours to own Your freedom, yours to keep

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Patricia Lawton

Date: 4/19/2018 4:39:00 AM

Ain't that the truth. Nice write JEFF. short and simply the way i like them!

Jeff Martin
Date: 4/23/2018 8:06:00 AM

Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/18/2018 3:00:00 PM

So much said in so few words..Loved reading the entire stanza, but especially the last two lines..well articulated, Jeff!

Jeff Martin
Date: 4/23/2018 8:06:00 AM

Thanks Vijay :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/18/2018 1:54:00 PM

Hello Jeff Martin,it is nice to meet you. I like the way you wrote this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Have a nice day my friend.

Jeff Martin
Date: 4/23/2018 8:09:00 AM

Nice to meet you too. Thank you, thank you, and thank you. Have a good day :)

Old Buck

Date: 4/18/2018 1:05:00 PM

Jeff: I needed a bit more background to understand this one. Maybe as I read your earlier works I will gain the knowledge I lack. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Jeff Martin
Date: 4/23/2018 2:53:00 PM

I know someone. And she is strong-willed and independent.