'free Verse On Love' - True Loves Ways

TRUE LOVES WAYS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My Dearest Darling my love for you is endless Each night we transcend to another plain of rapture a private plain where inhibitions are forbidden We explore the very depths of true love, sounds no other hear. The moon now waking dawn, we hold each others head, We touch lips, we kiss, we whisper words with our eyes only we can hear, true love for us will always be so special. You remember when I took your hand, that night We planned a life for us, when every smile, every touch Would mean 'I love you'. Another night I took your hand, thinking I've got this planned Will you, before I could say the magic words she said, "Yes" and "will you"? She took me by the hand, setting me on fire, I looked into her eyes, it was dawn, another night of passion. This is it, I'll ask her now, and without hesitation, I whispered in her ear, "Will you marry me" she fainted All that day we kissed each other back to life and now were man and wife ELATED! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
2/24/18 'Free Verse on Love' Contest, sponsored by Laura Loo
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Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Very romantic, a most enjoyable read, Mick. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Talbot Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Missed this one, thank you Line appreciated, Mick
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Mick, your romantic poem gave me chills! This kind of breathless love is what every couple seeks. Lovely! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Talbot Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Connie, Thank you on both counts, appreciated... Mick
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations Mick. Tom
Talbot Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Cheers Tom, appreciated... Mick
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:38 AM
"plain of rapture" how sensual and romantic dear poet, beautifully expressed!thank you and congrats : )-luloo
Talbot Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Hi Luloo, Thank you for your kind words and my placement... Mick ;-)
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February 24, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Me thinks me smells a winner ;)
Talbot Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thanks Maureen, Fingers crossed :-)
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February 24, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Hello Mick, this is a beutifully written romantic poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Talbot Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Hi Darlene, Hoping so, many thanks, Mick
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