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the moment- I saw my love it was a moment frozen it was a spiritual experience and I was swept away I abandoned myself to this perfect experience with obsessive musings- like an addict needing a fix it is more that his physical attractiveness I am lost in a forever, ever love being with him is like falling into a crystal clear stream where his kisses and words wash over me like waves I am an emotional wreck- who cannot sleep or eat my heart beats faster when he is even just talking to me when, we were apart, I am full of longing and lust falling in love is very bizarre- it just creeps up magically our life's are entwined and we are deeply bonded coated with desire- I long for his touch on my body the stroke of his hand on my hair, his breath he is my lover, my friend and my forever, ever we never crowd each other, we both have a life but when we are together the world fades he took a weeping girl- who was me and I healed and holding me in his arms he whispers his- forever love ___________________________ February 24, 2020 Added After Judging 2/28/2020- Poetry/Free Verse/On Love Copyright Protected, ID 20-1229-055-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Free Verse On Love sponsor, Lu Loo Second Place

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Date: 2/29/2020 6:21:00 AM
Congrats!! dear Constance...beautiful poetry my friend...the agony of love...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/29/2020 7:52:00 PM
WW, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 11:32:00 PM
Congrats girl Kn a great top win!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/29/2020 7:53:00 PM
Brenda, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 10:18:00 PM
You described exactly what it's like, Constance. The not being able to eat or sleep. I loved that line: like falling into a crystal clear stream. Big congrats for your win in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/29/2020 7:53:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats and the nice comment, I like that line too _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 10:12:00 PM
I love the line, "like an addict needing a fix" you just said how I always felt when my husband wasn't around. I always said he was my tranquillizer. Big congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 2/29/2020 7:54:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, I like that line too _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 7:01:00 PM
wow Constance this is beautiful...congratulations on your top win :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2020 9:14:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 6:54:00 PM
you outdid yourself again sweet Dear Heart, beautifully expressed as always...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement
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Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2020 9:14:00 PM
Lu, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, your themes always take me to a deep place _Constance
Date: 2/24/2020 1:11:00 PM
Wow Poetess, this poetry is so romantic...an innocent confession of love on your sweet lips. "He is my lover, my friend, my forever ever..." that touches the heart warmly...J.A.B. A FAV!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2020 11:35:00 AM
Justin, thanks for the visit and the nice comment and the FAV -Constance

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