Constance La France Poet Free verse

Free Verse On Love

the moment-   I saw my love it was a moment frozen
it was a spiritual experience and I was swept away
I abandoned myself to this perfect experience
with obsessive musings-  like an addict needing a fix

it is more that his physical attractiveness 
I am lost in a forever, ever love
being with him is like falling into a crystal clear stream
where his kisses and words wash over me like waves 

I am an emotional wreck-  who cannot sleep or eat
my heart beats faster when he is even just talking to me
when, we were apart, I am full of longing and lust
falling in love is very bizarre-   it just creeps up magically

our life's are entwined and we are deeply bonded
coated with desire-  I long for his touch on my body
the stroke of his hand on my hair, his breath 
he is my lover, my friend and my forever, ever

we never crowd each other, we both have a life
but when we are together the world fades 
he took a weeping girl-   who was me and I healed
and holding me in his arms he whispers his-   forever love

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February 24, 2020


Added After Judging  2/28/2020-

Poetry/Free Verse/On Love
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1229-055-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

Written for the contest, Free Verse On Love
sponsor, Lu Loo

Second Place

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Winged Warrior February 29, 2020 at 6:21 AM Congrats!! dear Constance...beautiful poetry my friend...the agony of love...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o) Constance La France February 29, 2020 at 7:52 PM WW, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful _Constance

Brenda Chiri February 28, 2020 at 11:32 PM Congrats girl Kn a great top win!;) Constance La France February 29, 2020 at 7:53 PM Brenda, thanks for the congrats _Constance

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2020 at 10:18 PM You described exactly what it's like, Constance. The not being able to eat or sleep. I loved that line: like falling into a crystal clear stream. Big congrats for your win in the contest. Constance La France February 29, 2020 at 7:53 PM Andrea, thanks for the congrats and the nice comment, I like that line too _Constance

Eve Roper February 28, 2020 at 10:12 PM I love the line, "like an addict needing a fix" you just said how I always felt when my husband wasn't around. I always said he was my tranquillizer. Big congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Constance La France February 29, 2020 at 7:54 PM Eve, thanks for the congratulations, I like that line too _Constance

Sandra Adams February 28, 2020 at 7:01 PM wow Constance this is beautiful...congratulations on your top win :) hugs Constance La France February 28, 2020 at 9:14 PM Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance

Beautiful Scars February 28, 2020 at 6:54 PM you outdid yourself again sweet Dear Heart, beautifully expressed as always...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement Constance La France February 28, 2020 at 9:14 PM Lu, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, your themes always take me to a deep place _Constance

Justin Bordner February 24, 2020 at 1:11 PM Wow Poetess, this poetry is so romantic...an innocent confession of love on your sweet lips. "He is my lover, my friend, my forever ever..." that touches the heart warmly...J.A.B. A FAV! Constance La France February 25, 2020 at 11:35 AM Justin, thanks for the visit and the nice comment and the FAV -Constance