Free Verse Makes Me Happy

Free verse is natural to me.
She calls to my soul. She gives me strength.
Rhymes prance forth in my brain sometimes.
Structured poems give me experience, 
stretch me, mold me, educate me.

Free verse ostentatiously demands her own way.
She makes me feel happy, for she seems natural.
However, when I want to stretch, I look up sonnet,
ninette, tanka, limerick … trying something new.
Luckily, no one says “what were you thinking?” 

Structure is not easy for me. 
I count my syllables differently. 
And yet, structure calls to my heart, 
because it forces me to think outside myself.

Poetry gives me new experiences,
stretching my imagination.
I am struggling to do the best I can, 
making a multitude of mistakes 
I wander through this poetic field of trying. 


Written 11-21-2019
Contest:  Free Verse Vs. Structured Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Na Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 1:44 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Caren
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 3:08 AM
Thank you so much Gregory!
Faulkner Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Wonderfully put - contrasting ideas can actually enrich each other - congratulations on your win in the contest, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 3:08 AM
Thank you Michelle.
Kiser Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Oh boy, me too. Free Verse is soulful but, I like stretching, as well. Enjoyed.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:44 PM
I do like trying new things and I know you do also M.L.
Lee Sr. Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Freely versed and yet so structurally profound rhythmic words combined together Write on! James
Krutsinger Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thank you James.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 4:37 AM
Excellent entry. I like Free verse mostly :) Love your poem. Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 3:20 PM
I am a free verse fanatic but test myself by forcing other types on me.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace