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The opera isn't over until the fat lady sings,
the demotic aphorism goes

Before the curtain goes up at the opera house, 
someone least expected comes out to close the show

She was no fat lady. Rather, a young soprano. 
A shy young girl about the age of sixteen.

She takes center stage; unsure of herself. 

Her eyes nervously scanning the audience 
as a hush fell over the packed house.

All were breathless with anticipation, waiting to hear 
her sing. Then she sprung a show-stopping surprise!

Mouths were agape, the applause, deafening. 
A show-stealing star was instantaneously born!

It's difficult not to be moved by 
the young soprano's lachrymose powerfully sung aria

The audience made their exit, astounded!



Free Verse Fever - A - Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Lu Loo
Date written: 01/19/2020
I chose: Astounded

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/24/2020 12:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Edward on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/24/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal:-)
Date: 1/23/2020 10:14:00 AM
Well done, congrats!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Richard:-)
Date: 1/23/2020 7:23:00 AM
the audience was astounded - so true. Seems like a great soprano :) very beautifully expressed dear Edward...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2020 12:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, Luloo:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/23/2020 12:52:00 AM
An Ode to Opera - love it! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Sir Edward - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Greg:-) Blessings to you, too!
Date: 1/22/2020 7:38:00 PM
Edward congrats on your win!;)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/22/2020 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda:-)
Date: 1/22/2020 2:23:00 PM
This is beautifully done. Enjoyed.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/22/2020 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.:-)
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