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Free Verse I live not far from humankind the cradle that is of what and where we are all coming from Johannesburg so they say and going to one human race of every colour no need for power domination colonializing margins The ‘dark continent’ where the ‘savages’ did not abide by our expectations of what civilized should be and mean where it was us the other 'othering' cannibalizing our flesh of freedom dignity compassion lost in money mind and soul My cradle rocks and sways in the wild gentle winds in torrents of emotion mood reflection history anticipation certain of uncertainty of what the intermingling retrospective past and future web together like a tapestry of life a bricolage Lost threads there are and double knitted faults and hollows shallow worn out spins and spiral knots and missing patches mended winding fabric scars and wounded oscillations swings and roundabouts cul-de-sacs and four-way stoppage Is there a pattern to cradling the moment to memories to fantasies of rooted wings and flapping roots a human kind of compass joining needles implements of mass construction subjective individual shining lights and armour idiosyncratic beauty Are we starving demising suffocating for self-righteousness loosing the plot and all the marbles thrown high up in the air with juggled balls we aim to fix the waters rivers flowing on their own with push and pull of light and lighted gravitation Just here and now not there and then when sunshine rises where rainbows glitter melt and wax the wane all of the colours into violet prisms focussing condensing refracting blinding darkness understanding knowledge of the shadows and bright clarity When I write some thoughts on paper on the screen of modern techniques and ancient art of crafted words and scripted meaning the cradling of the moment takes its paths of where I’ve started off and might be going once and only when the moment passes 02nd July 2016 written in Johannesburg and everywhere

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Date: 6/21/2020 10:00:00 AM
So I can equally say " Lover Poetic free styler"...Talented & gracefully weaving Golden Concrete images on my neural cubicle Bravo Neumann. Bravo Versatility of your composure, peaky Paramount pleasure perfectly performed purely playing on Me in my fave. Right away........... Bravo
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Date: 9/10/2016 1:49:00 AM
Hi Kai, adding ro my previous comment in your poem about feeding ducklings i reiterate that your poetry is incredible. What a surprìse to see youre from SA. I too live in the Crafle of Mankind. Congratulations on your win btw
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/10/2016 4:38:00 AM
Hi Jannie and thank you. Where do you live then? We are in Buccleuch in Johennesburg...
Date: 7/9/2016 8:14:00 AM
Such an amazing poem, Kai. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy First Place win in Julia's Premiere contest. 7 Sandra
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/9/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra for your comment and praise.
Date: 7/9/2016 3:59:00 AM
I am awed by this magnificent piece Kai! Congratulations on your deserving first place! 7 ; )
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/9/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment and encouragement Connie.
Date: 7/7/2016 6:11:00 PM
Congrats Kai, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! :-)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/8/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Teddy. I am chuffed and did not expect that win. So encouraging.
Date: 7/7/2016 2:57:00 PM
A wow of a poem, Kai !! Well done, and well deserved !!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/8/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Carrie for your comment and support. Chuffed to bits.
Date: 7/7/2016 1:09:00 PM
Very deserving Kai, congratulations...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/8/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. I will just keep on writing and writing...
Date: 7/7/2016 8:35:00 AM
Wow! very deep read. Congratulations on the well earned win :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/8/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much for your encouragement. But I like your poem very much as well.
Date: 7/7/2016 2:22:00 AM
I was thrilled with your poem. Congratulations on winning the trophy in my contest!
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/8/2016 11:47:00 AM
You're most welcome! :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/8/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Julia. Thank you as well for shaping the contest.

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